Not bad
I must say that wasn't too bad at all. I dont want to get into a philisophical debate, but I have to say, I admire the fact that you have the balls to make a game like this and post it here. Kudos to you, sir.
As far as critiquing goes, maybe change up the language next time. While "AAAH, FUCK FUCK FUCK!" is funny once, maybe twice, some variation on his screams would have added alot.
Anyway, rock forth.