A lot of improvements
I quite liked this submission. Adding voices made a great addition to the whole thing. What I would suggest though is that you get someone who speaks English as a first language to just give your grammar a quick once-over, as there are a few errors creeping in there.
Now it's beginning to look a lot like Animator Vs Animation, which you seem to have borrowed heavily from, not that that's worth criticising, as it's a great thing to borrow from.
When I said about merging 1-3, forget that. Maybe merge 1 & 2, because compared to this, they are ridiculously short.
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