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Reviews for "Mario In Newgrounds III"

good sprite movie, way better than most

The menu was really cool, as well as the in-game play/pause/etc. You get a 10 on interactivity, but there seemed to be one small problem. The preloader only appears when about 60% of the movie is loaded. Please look into that. Sounds, for instance, should NOT be set to load on the first frame. There is a similar setting for other things like objects. Make sure things load after the first frame so that the preloader appears immediately.

The music and sound was nicely done, especially the Mario voice acting. Also, using plenty of Mario sound effects to match the games was a good idea. I wonder if it could have been compressed/clipped more though. The NG audio portal has some nice instructions about how to reduce audio file size that you may want to look at.

Put some alpha around the pause button so that it is easier to click on.

Make the "other movies" button open a new window instead of replacing the contents of the flash popup.

Work on the grammer. Poor grammer is distracting. If English is not a first language or something, I suggest finding someone that can help improve the grammer.

Finally, the animation was actually quite good in this movie, but maybe work on your anticipations? For instance, it looked unnatural when the goombas just starting moving up into the air (jumping) to land on that mushroom guy. You could size them down then up real quick to give a bit of wind-up for the jump so it looks more natural. Same with Mario punching, you could have him rear back before delivering his punch--it would look more natural. The animation of the red balls could also possibly use improvement...you could have them wind-up for a strike by moving in the opposite direction for a short bit before moving to hit Mario. The purpose is to make it look more natural, so don't over-do it or anything.

Hopefully you will find this review helpful.

K

^^Good Points^^
Definitely a lot better than any of the previous episodes. Your skills in graphics have increased by a whole lot, with lots more effects and a great new layout for the whole thing. The voice overs were cool and the storyline made more sense in this episode.

^^Needs Improving^^
Again, sound could be compressed a bit to reduce size, and also some grammar issues. Other than that this looks pretty good.

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YAY IT GETS BETTER AND BETTER

how do you come up with this it's great plz when is min IV coming out
I NEED TO KNOW
love the voices

Dugh responds:

Thanks! I will pm you when its out!
I dont know where I get it from.. I just wait until I get the "special feeling", then I work my ass off ;)

Man...

I love the music you put in it!!!! I can't wait to see the rest.

Dugh responds:

Thanks for the positive review! :D
Watch out for MIN IV! Coming soon!

great movie but a few thing to look out for

1 STOP KILLING LUIGI GRRRRR
2 you should include bowser and wario if possible
3 a sneaky ending if macs invade windows and beat them lol