Reviews for Mario In Newgrounds III

[Coop]

A lot of improvements

I quite liked this submission. Adding voices made a great addition to the whole thing. What I would suggest though is that you get someone who speaks English as a first language to just give your grammar a quick once-over, as there are a few errors creeping in there.

Now it's beginning to look a lot like Animator Vs Animation, which you seem to have borrowed heavily from, not that that's worth criticising, as it's a great thing to borrow from.

When I said about merging 1-3, forget that. Maybe merge 1 & 2, because compared to this, they are ridiculously short.

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Dugh responds:

Thanks, your review helped me alot! :D

[iladan]

great movie but a few thing to look out for

1 STOP KILLING LUIGI GRRRRR
2 you should include bowser and wario if possible
3 a sneaky ending if macs invade windows and beat them lol

[FattyWhale]

K

^^Good Points^^
Definitely a lot better than any of the previous episodes. Your skills in graphics have increased by a whole lot, with lots more effects and a great new layout for the whole thing. The voice overs were cool and the storyline made more sense in this episode.

^^Needs Improving^^
Again, sound could be compressed a bit to reduce size, and also some grammar issues. Other than that this looks pretty good.

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[Yoshi-1up]

Nice job!

You got some great effects and the idea is funny. Lip syncing is alright. Bad grammar and camera angles though. Voice acting is pretty good!
Nice menu and play options. Too much blur effects cause choppiness.

Simply Splenda. :D LOL

Dugh responds:

Thanks for the review! :D

[Vochando]

What's with that big box?

It was kind of annoying, especially when mario went behind it. put the controls at the bottom or something.
anyways good job overall

Dugh responds:

Thanks for the review! I will do something with the player in part IV, for sure!