Reviews for Mario In Windows III

[RSQViper]

Fair

Your story was ok, your animation was fair, you humor was good, but your grammar and spelling were HORRIBLE. I mean there were mistakes in grammar all over the place and you spelled things wrong all the time and got words mixed up, too. You replaced "must" with "most", for one.

What you need is for someone to look over your work before you submit so they can fix all this for you. There's no excuse for this many errors, it was really bad. Distracting, really.

Edit your stuff BEFORE submitting. It would have been good otherwise.

1/5

[jaxknight]

Boring....

it seems stopped, u need to put more action on it or give more life, cause it bores. Try to make the sounds better, not only u, but lots of people put the game sounds inapropietly (sorry if spelled wrong) and it sometimes spoils. Overall, plot something that won´t tire the viewer, arrange the sound and music and be careful with spelling mistakes (like its to save and not safe shown on the second movie I think) Hope you can make better flashes

[grC]

No thanks.

I wasn't really digging it from the beginning, got into it a little when I saw the animation, then completely abandoned all hope when the word bubbles started appearing. You people really have to start using better grammar, unless you're trying to be funny, in which case it usually works.

[Coop]

Look for positives

This one is really short, which doesn't make it a great ending for a series. Basically, you could have batched all three together into maybe 1 movie submission.

Having seen all 6 of your works so far, I am confident that you can do better now, but face it, you can now look back at this one and see where your faults lie.

Learn from your mistakes and go out there and give us what we want - quality flash, which makes us smile

[Review Request Club]

Dugh responds:

I know this is shit.. I lost the speciel feeling after I submited MIN 2.
I dont want to just stop the serie so I maked a part 3 fast and began practice FbF and other things.
(Im still very surprised over it not got blammed..)

[Pappy135]

shamefull

i loved your movie exept from after it stoped load

if you wanna be beta at flash look at other peoples submitions and think how can i do that... then do it