ok
well it was ok, and the peach bit was quite funny but.... luigi will pleasure mario if he kills the cursor???
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what the heck!!!
this is not my style but the style 0 lol so keep it up and upgreade your movie ok well when it's done under jugement of corse sorry about spelling i will review you again soon...
You know what's funny?
I've been browsing through the reviews of this submission, and roughly 90% of the people who tell you to mind your language errors can't type up a proper sentence themselves.
Guys, if you're going to bash someone on their "grammer", I suggest you learn how to spell the damn word right first. It's grammar. With an a. Bunch of hypocrites.
Anyway, back to the flash.
Graphics: Well, yeah, it's a sprite and desktop rip, can't go wrong there :P --> 10
Style: Could be better, could be worse. You've got some potential, you just lack the capacity to show it completely. Keep it up, and I know you'll improve a lot. --> 5
Sound: Nothing special there. No annoying sound, but nothing spectacular either --> 5
Violence: Well, it was a "fight", if you can call it that, but seeing as how there's absolutely no gore involved (which isn't necessarily a bad thing, mind you), it drops to a --> 7
Interactivity: It's a movie, so this is self explanatory --> 0
Humor: Pretty much the same bit I said about the style. Keep working on it, you'll get better. --> 5
Overall: The flash could've been front page material, if it didn't feel so rushed. Like others have said (despite their own grammatical and spelling errors), have someone look over your works before submitting them to the portal, and making your flash a bit longer would've helped as well.
This was ok....
The animation could have used more action, and there were tons of spelling errors in the typed speaking bubbles. The story also lacked plot and purpose. However, it was a good idea and I like the fact that the creator is trying to incorporate classic mario games into animation, but in the end I think more effort could have been put into the animation.
K
^^Good Points^^
Ok, well I liked the music and sound effects, as you have done a good job with them throughout the series. I thought the flashback scene was pretty funny as well.
^^Needs Improving^^
Honestly, this didn't make much sense. Why the heck did Luigi just suddenly realize he was dieing? He seemed to fight the cursor flawlessly. Also, many spelling errors were in this.
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