This was ok....
The animation could have used more action, and there were tons of spelling errors in the typed speaking bubbles. The story also lacked plot and purpose. However, it was a good idea and I like the fact that the creator is trying to incorporate classic mario games into animation, but in the end I think more effort could have been put into the animation.
Boring....
it seems stopped, u need to put more action on it or give more life, cause it bores. Try to make the sounds better, not only u, but lots of people put the game sounds inapropietly (sorry if spelled wrong) and it sometimes spoils. Overall, plot something that won´t tire the viewer, arrange the sound and music and be careful with spelling mistakes (like its to save and not safe shown on the second movie I think) Hope you can make better flashes
Hmmmm...
The initial idea is nice! Mario's trapped in the terrible world of Windows. But your animation is so boring... :(
You need to improve your animation skills. You should add some background music and sound effects. Add some enemies too. Like an evil Internet Explorer logo who try to eat Mario like Pacman...
So, good luck on your next project...
Most horrible grammar I have ever seen in a flash.
Are you even from America? You can't spell worth a shit. Nor can you animate or make flashes very well. Graphics were awful; all you did was use sprites (that takes so much effort **sarcasm**). Animation was smooth but that doesn't justify the graphics portion of the flash. Style... Mario and Luigi. Been done to death. For the most part not too original. Sound. You didn't even do voices for it. I had to hear the horrible "coic collection" sound over and over and then I had to read your terrible mispelled sentences (often you didn't even use the right words. You hardly made any sense at all). Use real voices next time. They help bring a flash to life. Violence. Stuff died. 3. Interactivity. Well it's a flash and I can't say I expected much in it especially if it was coming from you. Humor? The only part remotely funny was Marios' flashback with Peach. It's the only reason I didn't give you a 0. Overall, just a waste of time, and I wouldn't say that I hoThe only part remotely funny was Marios' flashback with Peach. It's the only reason I didn't give you a 0 in humor. Overall, was pretty much just a waste of time. I won't say that I hope this gets blammed, but I sure as hell hope you actually TRY next time. And learn to spell. I realize this made me sounds like a jerk, etc., but at least I was contructive. Take what I said into mind before you make flashes again or don't do it.
waste of time?
yes. that was really lame.the cursor was so evil that it could beat the shit outta luigi but couldnt dodge a bullet that only goes straight.