You know what's funny?
I've been browsing through the reviews of this submission, and roughly 90% of the people who tell you to mind your language errors can't type up a proper sentence themselves.
Guys, if you're going to bash someone on their "grammer", I suggest you learn how to spell the damn word right first. It's grammar. With an a. Bunch of hypocrites.
Anyway, back to the flash.
Graphics: Well, yeah, it's a sprite and desktop rip, can't go wrong there :P --> 10
Style: Could be better, could be worse. You've got some potential, you just lack the capacity to show it completely. Keep it up, and I know you'll improve a lot. --> 5
Sound: Nothing special there. No annoying sound, but nothing spectacular either --> 5
Violence: Well, it was a "fight", if you can call it that, but seeing as how there's absolutely no gore involved (which isn't necessarily a bad thing, mind you), it drops to a --> 7
Interactivity: It's a movie, so this is self explanatory --> 0
Humor: Pretty much the same bit I said about the style. Keep working on it, you'll get better. --> 5
Overall: The flash could've been front page material, if it didn't feel so rushed. Like others have said (despite their own grammatical and spelling errors), have someone look over your works before submitting them to the portal, and making your flash a bit longer would've helped as well.