Excelent
This is a great flash movie, the only faults i found in this is the audio is a little hard to understand, and the human arn't as good looking as the humans in the armor other than that this is grade A+ material i look forward to more episodes in the future.
Not so great
First off, it's too action based. They talk only to give us a little time to rest between the fights. If you actualy spend time on writing the plot, why the hell do you dwarf it compared to the action? Hell, you added "Skip the Plit" buttons to this movie.
Second, the action isn't that great. You should put much more effort into animating the fights, frame by frame. Your fights are nearly as good as fights in a comics, meaning that you barely make use of the fact that your characters can move. You pretty much just show one frame per action, rather than giving each actiion a few seconds of animation.
Third, the novelty is wearing off. The first flash was really great, because it was so original. The second was a bit more boring. I barely finished watching the third. The original flash had novelty going for it. It was cool seeing the Marines from Starcraft talking about Starcraft stuff. Now it's just boring. The fact that they escaped from crap only to fall into shit just as the movie ended was surprising. Now it's the first thing I expect to see.
In other words, you've jumped the shark.
I know the first was novel - however I always planned to tell a story, not just have one episode, so I'm going to finish it whether it's boring or not, because not doing so is pretty arse. Thanks for the tip on the fighting scenes though - and I won't have the option to skip plot in the next one. That was to fascilitate poeple who don't give a crap, but ... stuff them heh.
A review for all three
Excellent animation and storyline, friend. Quite possibly a trio of the best on newgrounds. However all the voices in the actual game are very american, most of them with southern or redneck accents. The British accents on all the soldiers didn't sit well with me. I know you did your best with what you had, but try and use different people to add different voices. but when everyone sounds the same with the same accent, you lose interest in the character. Lucky for you you didn't need character interest to make your story awesome, you already had that.
Cheers - Yea voices are my weakest point at the moment, I had a voice actor but we ended up having a party instead of doing anything heh. Next time we don't do that!
Very enjoyable
Thankyou for the 3 video's. I had great fun watching them all and remembering my days playing starcraft. If there is one thing i'd advise is mixing in a little diversity into the voices.
STARCRAFT!!!!!
don't get me wrong, i LOVE this!!! but it's a bit corny^^
the script ain't something, but the more starcraft goodies the merrier:D
keep it up:)
btw: i noticed you're really speedy! quick releases every time, keeping everyone interested...