good job
I think it's nice to see how much your abilities have improved on such short notice, this one was even better than the last. You worked on the zerg, which is good, but I think they still require some improvement. Melee battles aren't exactly your thing, but it made the space battle further on in the story look even cooler.
Normaly, I'd have given this an 8, but we're talking about Starcraft here ^^.