nice
I actually really liked this, you did really good on artwork and everything, the only thing i didn't like was I thought the sound and music could have been better quality, and I was a little confused on what was going in the story...I also liked how when you're reading the introduction you could tell it to continue when you were done reading, as opposed to most flashes where you either have to speed read to get the plot, or sit there for five minutes after you're done reading.
This was all good...nice job