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Add a story, right now its a waste of time. -good animation is only 2 of the 6 catagorys.
Reviews for "Dendyn Dynasties"
didnt really like it
well, if you ask me that was ok for a first submission. But i didnt like it that much
Great!
The animation was super perfect, men i never seen anything soo smooth, not even in real cartoons its usually so smooth, the ONLY thing in this that made it bad, not the ONLY thing... Where the music, the music was not great at all you know MIDI-formats is not so good for an animation... I know its hard to make music and stuff like that, but its possible...
My scored might seem odd
Your graphics were very nice along with your style. Some of the best ive seen in a while. I didnt like the music, but it was able to be heard well. Violence, well not blood or anything, just a bunch of hitting so, i suppose i gave a resonable score. of course interactivity is decently high, because all the clicking next. not really funny, at some moments but not much. Personally though, it was kinda boring. I think it would be a better idea to manually show the story line instead of having people click it to make it go. I liked the action, but it was jsut random fighting. When you start with a story line then you actually say "random fighting" it just kinda throws the balance of the flash out of order. I will admit though, you have wonderful talent on animation, and this is a great cartoon, but i just didnt like it. It just bored me. keep up the work. Maybe a whole other cartoon. still ill give it a 4/5
Good graphics and then you lost me.
Although the graphics and animation are fairly well done, There is a total lack of substance or originality. The concept of furry little anime creatures fighting evil in some sort of feudal kingdom has been run into the ground already. This animation was well executed but the style is a carbon copy and practically indistinguishable from a million like it. It might have worked better if it were a parody of the genre and employed more humor. Furthermore, the fact that the author makes a point to tell you to ignore the absense of a story only serves to emphasize that there isn't one.
Ryanide responds:
Fair enough. I tried to parody the conventions used in RPG games, but obviously it was lost on you. And of course there isn't a story, there isn't supposed to be, it's a trailer!>_<
But thanks, I'll consider what you said for next time.