Well, it wasn't bad.
I gotta pretty much agree with what the person before me said, but I think it was better than they gave it credit for. All that must have taken a whole lot of time, and it was obvious that i started getting better later on.
But I'm really not sure what that was he pulled out at the beginnnig though :P I'll take thir word for it that it was a gituar.
XD Well, that thing was a guitar, it made the drrriiiinng sound, trust me. Glad you liked it.
Wow...
This is probably one of the best flashes I've ever seen, not because of the graphics, not by a long shot, but by the message it conveys. I loved it. I'll definitly give this a 5. Good work, keep up the GREAT work!
~Orion~
I'll do better on graphics, but thanks, the message goes deep.
Needs work
The "song" itself is so good and true that it makes the rest of the flash seem better than it really is. Your art really needs work. It took me a while to figure out that the the thing the guy pulled out from under the podium at the beginning was a guitar. It really did not look like one. Not to mention pretty much all the rest of the art in the flash. The animation wasn't bad however. When there was movement it went relatively smoothly. As far as style goes, you did pretty well, even though you were just animating whatever the lyrics said (far too literally most of the time), which generally irks me in music videos. Basically that's it. Just work on improving your art.
I worked on this for 4 months, but since I slacked off some times, during the begining was when I didn't know too much about shading, but I got the hang of it later on. You can see how some things improved during the song.
Thank you for your constructive critisism. I can't appeal to everyone's tastes, but I'm gonna try my hardest.
That was as deep as it gets.
Man, that was very good. I think that flash inspired me a little. Thanks for the advice. Please, keep up the great work. :D
Will do. Thanks for the nice review, and remember to always wear sunscreen. :)
Simply Amazing.
I loved this.
this is the most meaningful, true flash ive ever seen.
THANK YOU.
im putting this song on my iPod.
I'm absolutely honored to let others hear this song. When I first heard it, I had the same reaction. Thank you.