Too bad the toon that could have been
Obiously you used the traditional story to put a gothic slant on it.
Sort of ruined the beauty of your drawing.
Yes its well told and well executed. But ugly never the less.
too bad.
Reviews for "Red Riding Hood"
good graphics, bad story.
I mean, the graphics are wonderful, don't get me wrong, but the story was just awful...
I mean, there were just so many little things that contributed nothing to the story, fore example, The corset thing, the battle between the hunter and the whole, the whole red eating her own mother thing... Those were just pointless... Nothing came of any of those points in the flash...
Sure, they did make the flash longer, I mean, you can only drag the red riding hood story out for so long, but you could have donw without those parts...
Also, I think you may have a slur, and it could also be the microphone you're using, but the voices weren't too great, either...
Aside from that, you're a very talented animator, but story counts a lot, too.
I do look forewards to more of your peices, though.
well...
I prefer the true story, and just to enlighten you... IT'S NOT THE GRIMS THAT INVENTED THE RED RIDING HOOD! XP
B-movietacular!
The voice acting was poor as was the delivery of the story, I kept expecting there to be a punchline but it never came. "Surely something this cheesy is self-aware" I thought.
The narration is insulting, I'm sure your audience would realise that someone who wears a scarlet cloak is the titular character.
Great animation, art and style but the overall feel of the film made me cringe.
I think you should find somone else to perform the voice roles in future productions and consult with someone else about the script.
The art was good but WHY DID YOU MAKE IT?!!
You did the art and animation well, but the narration was really over-the-top (the character voices) and the story was so messed up and ill-conceived. Why did you have an urge to make a weird gothic horror version of this story?!
The part about the uncle and the corset was so ridiculously random, gross and stupid; what did it have to do with anything?! And the wolf fighting the woodsman part was pretty random and pointless too, plus why was the wolf just a hairy guy with long hair? He didn't have a wolf's face or anything.
The best part was the grass at the beginning, and the chimney smoke. The art was very good and stylish, but really, what was the point?!