Wow, that was great
It was fantastic in animation, style, sound the whole caboodle.
I thought at times the narration was a bit cheesy.
I'm not really a fan of outright stating what happens. "Then the wolf ate Red Riding Hood!" sorry that made me chuckle.
What was the whole thing with the mean uncle and corset...a Jin Roh reference? Because I was confused.
Awesome job though, don't really need to improve on anything just stating pet peeves :-)