Not Too Bad (3)
This is worthy of keeping, and you got a 3 from me. However, you need some work.
Most specifically, in the sound. Your sound is horribly inconsistant. To hear dialogue, I need to turn up the speakers -- for which I am immediately punished by sound that is far too loud.
Either you need to remaster the sound, or just rerecord with some adequate tech.
Animation was good, and for what I was actually able to hear so was the humour. Keep it up, work out the sound kinks, and you might have something here.