Great, honest effort.
As with most 'buddies flash' it did rely heavily on the same trite themes however for most these never grow tiresome. What am I saying? Honestly it was rather funny.
The problem? Sound. The sound was not up to par with the rest of the work. At some points you would have to turn up the volume to hear the voices... only to have to turn it down when a sound effect blared in the speaker. Suggestion: Watch your levels on programs like goldwire and be sure that they don't ping. As for the mic issue when recording maintain a constant distance and don't eat the microphone. You are getting alot of sputtering when people emote. Wrap the mics in toilet paper if you can't afford a good boom mic ATM.
Again great effort and the longevity of the humor in a 12 minute flash was surprising.
Keep up the fantastic work, i look forward to your next effort.