Same 'ol thing all over again
First of all, look up my review for the first part because I'm not going to repeat myself. I am going to review this movie based on the animation. The animation wasn't jaw dropping, and the voice acting was mediocre. Tell me, how many voice actors were there to help you? There is no much more criticism about this movie that others haven't already said...
I've watched both 1 and 2
and well to be honest other than the sympathy stuff I don't see what's so great about either one. You wanted to make a tribute to your brother right? That's fine, in fact I think that's a GREAT thing to do but what's with all the self pity bullshit?
In both flashes, your brother is only on screen for about 1/4 of the film and the rest is about how sad you are and how you've been abused by people. The animation is horrible and the voice acting sounds monotonous. In fact the entire thing was just boring. I guess I would feel sorry for you if it wern't for the fact that, well that type shit happens all the time in real life. The way you portrayed it however seems very unrealistic though. I've seen much worse things in real life and I'm sure as hell that people just don't say things like "hey! who is there?" when they get grabbed by someone. A user said that the dialogue is corny and I couldn't agree more.
Anyway, what I'm trying to say is what are you trying to accomplish? It would be nice if you just made a flash showing how much of a good person your brother was and paying tribute to him and then that's it. But, you seem to be more concerned about having people be sorry about you and that's not the correct way to pay tribute to your brother. I am starting to wonder if anything you say is even true because a lot of it seems very far-fetched (especially some of the scenes in the first flash). If your brother really is dead, please make a proper flash about him and stop making those damn self pity scenes. I'm sure that if he were alive today he wouldn't want you to reflect and feel sad about or have people feel sorry about such minute things such as some time when some guy grabbed you and ran away. You can't live live reflecting on the past and feeling sad. Make a tribute to your brother then move on, and keep living on for the future without looking back.
what the fuck is this?
allright, ur brother died, im sympathetic, but this submission was complete bullshit. the story could have been explained in 30 seconds but u streched it out for the entire flash.
to save you people time, heres what happens:
sister and brother get a job delivering newspapers
sister gets assaulted when she delievers by herself
brother delivers papers by himself from then on
OVER. THEN ITS DONE.
too slow too boring not worth it.
sorry, this just annoyed me and i had to give my two cents. take me or leave em.
Ya...
Um, what the hell happened to Newgrounds? I come here to have fun, not to get sad hearing about dramatic crap like this. What happened to xaio xaio having stick figures that beat serious ass?..
I wanna see exploding dinosaurs and people getting kicked in the mouth... If I wanted to see stuff like this then I'd go to the soaps channel...
Okay. You win.
*showers you with e-attention*