Straight up boring!
VERY lousy composed. I won't go into specifics, but that was actually very bad..... The only good thing was the drawings, but the animation sucked that much, to ruin it...
Straight up boring!
VERY lousy composed. I won't go into specifics, but that was actually very bad..... The only good thing was the drawings, but the animation sucked that much, to ruin it...
Unconvincing
Sorry about the low score but thats all I felt it deserved. Ppl say it is touching and emotional but I'm not feeling it. I'm not cold, this just isn't touching me in any way. The poor animation and unconvincing voices coupled with slow dialogue make it hard to take seriously. I saw part 1, that was better with more substance which has not carried through, although it did share the same slowness. So far you haven't really identified why you made this series, you make your brother look good and caring, but so are most brothers. You say you don't want pity yet thats what alot of ppl are giving you, I'm seeing it a different way to them. Maybe their very sensitive or easily touched. I'll be watching for the next part of this series, not in excitement but in wonder of how you will tie this up.
Slow
First of all i would like to say that you've created a very nice piece of work, i would like to thank you for sharing it. However as a viewer it didnt really appeal to me. I found the plot slow and uninteresting.
Hmmm..
Nope, I had to quit watching it before it made me go to sleep... it was very boring. It's sooo much like your other one, it seems like your bro came back to life and went away again in this part... This flash had potential... Your graphics are pretty good though. Keep it up, do something with sunshines or rainbows next time because I think thats what your brother would want you to be feeling... =p
Boring.
Without meaning to give offence to your brother, this is very very boring. I accept you are trying to give an account of events accurately, but man, it just goes SO slowly - I found no enjoyment whatasoever in watching this, as well as the music being very quiet, and animation being quite innacurate and choppy too... Please, make the next one vaguely entertaining.