good
kinda boring though
good
kinda boring though
Feelings, its nice to see them
i just want to know if this story really happened to u or its just your imagination either way i liked it very much. I think the graphics where ok, the color were nice, the thing i cared most is that with little animation u can show many things.... just one thing i have to say ur expression of feelings in the voices were wonderful, but i couldnt feel them in the characters thats my only advise. And one more thing keep up the good work and im looking forward to the next chapter..........;) Night_Sea M7
Nice
This is a series dont judge its merit one one part. The idea in whole is nice, Its not an action or comedy.
Dont listen to Daax, he's complete and utter moron. "Relatives dropping like flies", to state it in such a way shows his family must not be close, or he is a cold hearted bastard,
I have 3 brothers and we are close, if i lost one it would take more than "2 days" to get over it, he is probably one of those who comes to newgrounds to get off on the hentai and slop up on the violence.
Animation is good, dialouge is a little loose, but keep trying.Hard to win over everyone, Ive seen worse drawn and animated flashes get great reviews and yet to know why
needs better delivery
I dont understand the story, if there is a story to begin with. The movie is basically just about a bunch of kids doing kid stuff. In the author's comments it says that the flash is to show what a kind person the brother is, yet I dont think the brother in the movie had any personality at all. And it seems like you are working with a whole crew of people, but it seems that no1 knows how to do much frame-by-frame animation or even notices that the sound is way too low?
Much improvement
I think you are making great strides in your cartoons. Also, the way you portray your story from your point of view gives the viewer a special view through your eyes. I think you are doing a fantastic job and will be waiting for your next episode. Your brother seems like a great guy wish there were more people like him. Keep up the good work!