I'm sorry about your brother. My condolences.
Good animation and such in terms of the Flash itself. The animation style reminds me of Hayao Miyazaki's works. However, it is a bit choppy, but maybe I'm being too critical. Nice job with the Flash, and again, sorry about your brother.
needs better delivery
I dont understand the story, if there is a story to begin with. The movie is basically just about a bunch of kids doing kid stuff. In the author's comments it says that the flash is to show what a kind person the brother is, yet I dont think the brother in the movie had any personality at all. And it seems like you are working with a whole crew of people, but it seems that no1 knows how to do much frame-by-frame animation or even notices that the sound is way too low?
Good
I enjoyed part 1 when it was first put up and again I feel its kind of you to share such important and overall private events in your life with everyone.
That said the graphics didn't seem as detailed as I remember part 1's. That might just be my memory however. Again thats not to say these one's were bad, wouldn't have gotten an 8 if I thought that. But still, a tad more detail might be in order I think.
From your own comments it sounds like people have commented on the sound already. It wasn't the best but it was a damn long way fromt he worst so not something to be overly concerned with. Seeing as you already have voice actors might be an idea to look for a composer too though, havign even one original high quality composition would help increase that 6 I gave a lot. Of course musicians don't grow on trees.... not last time I looked anyways. Maybe I should just check that... Oh only other comment on sound before I go totally off topic is that you MIGHT as a director want to eb a tad tougher ont he voice actors because to me at least they did sound rather wooden most of the time.
I look forward to seeing part 3 at some point in the not too distant future, and don't let any of the people that give sucky reviews get to you. Remember Halons Razor: Never attribute to malice that which can be just as easily explained by stupidity.
good
I think it was pretty good except that violence is more my thing, and this is a more time to cry flash. Good anyways
Much improvement
I think you are making great strides in your cartoons. Also, the way you portray your story from your point of view gives the viewer a special view through your eyes. I think you are doing a fantastic job and will be waiting for your next episode. Your brother seems like a great guy wish there were more people like him. Keep up the good work!