The animation was good, the audio was good, but...
It lacked something. It felt stretched out, and somewhat pointless. "Buy our peanuts, they contain traces of fish!" It just didn't work. and if you ask me, it was that films story that was insignificant. Sorry to say bad things about what must've taken you ages to make.
psuedo meaningful stories make my eyes bleed...
It was very well done and the sound was excellent. But for the love of god get a decent story. It was down right boring. I keep seeing these amazing graphical movies that have shitty stories. You have to look at your target audience here at NG. Feel free to continue with your "meaningful" (which 90% I interpret something different) or "cute" movies (Which I wish NG staff would stop sticking on the front page)
well...
yeah the graphics and animation are pretty amazing, but I think that was way longer than it needed to be... especially with how little of it actually contributed to the story... I dunno, maybe there's more that I'm missing, but a lot of it just seemed like random shots of scenery or animals that didn't have anything to do with the actual story. Also, the intro credits were much to long... they either need to be shortened or there needs to be more happening during them so people don't get bored too quickly. Sorry, to sound rather negative, I still thought the movie was good, I'm just trying to give helpful critisism to maybe help with future releases...
ghey
*cough*ghey*cough* Horrible, I hated it, BUT, I loved the animation, music, and that's about it. You could be a great flash maker, if you only chose a different style of flash.
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im sorry, but i fell asleep while watching that, it was so boring, i dropped off while watching the deer at the start, shorten it down, and more people might give it a chance, but the art and animation rocked!