lets be honest here
the graphics were tight hands down. its just the story line.
The problems:
-I had no fucking clue what was happening, the chapters got me confused and all. I closed after a while.
-Need to work on storyline.
-Omfg... sound. music sucked.
The good:
+Graphics
+animation
Sir you are a god at animating. Just a shitty ass script writer.
A very good piece
The background art was very nicely done. Some of the foreground didn't quite live up to the same standard, but this was easily ignored due to the general professionalism and artistic vision of the work as a whole. I felt that the slightly cartoonish expressions of the fish were a little inappropriate, but again, this was easily forgiven. Some of the wide shots that showed off the more massive elements of the world were very impressive and well pulled-off. I also commend you for having the courage to pace this how you wanted to, which I think really paid off. It didn't seem particularly long or drawn out at all – it seemed to be the natural length for this particular story. All in all a very well executed animation. Well done.
Good Job.
That was a very impressive flash. However, the music got very old, the story needed more flesh to it, and since the background was so great, I don't understand why you didn't take the time to do a good job on some of the animals in the story, it would be easy with your talent to fix them (particularly the sheep.) There is no need to be so mystic about the mythology you have in it, it's clear that it comes from something the way you wrote it, and would probably add to the story if you explained it better. Also, in the beginning where the view shifts around from place to place and animal to animal, more than anything else that was just confusing and I honestly believe you did it only to show off. Sorry, but it's my honest opinion. If you want to show other animals in a story about fish and peanuts, expand the thesis or make a different flash with a different thesis.
Just a question
You did an awesome animation job and all. . . just to tell which message? Peanuts got a story??? That's weird. Some people try to make others happy, laugh, get sad, think of a situation.... but this one... I think the message was lame. . . sorry that's my point of view. Just make a better plot and everything shall be better.
WOW
Extremely well done story, I haven't found fish in my peanuts before but once again extremely well done, your a good writer, great story, really well done, and even with out having to say a word, I loved it, nice work, seriously.