I liked this one a lot!
There was a bit of humor in this one I liked it. Although eyeing eyeballs wouldn't be my thing. Very nicely done, good choice of sprites for that Bekkler dude. Who, I have to admit, is someone who I wouldn't want to meet in a dark alley way somewhere. Way to go man, the story is unfolding nicely and hopefully there won't be a feast of Moogle eyes. :\