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The Elite Guard Barracks

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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-06 01:53:48


At 3/5/07 03:18 PM, Sterockicy wrote: I have decided that I will be making it every 2nd Tuesday.

That's good to know.

At 3/6/07 01:21 AM, Sterockicy wrote: Barracks roster – March 6, 2007

Thanks again.

Top 5 Gainers:

Sentio – 1297
pepeatumi – 1149
dave – 1071
ADT – 1069
ArtDanVal – 1022

Grats to them.

01 // 50869 // 1069 // 76.3- // ADT
02 // 48566 // 902 // 64.4- // Phantom

I see you guys are still holding out strong.

I don't like it. >:(

03 // 47480 // 744 // 53.1+ // X-Naut

Probably the best I've had in a while.

04 // 46405 // 659 // 47.0+ // BlueHippo

About time he got back into b/ping.

05 // 41405 // 173 // 12.3- // Major-punk

Won't be much of a threat.

06 // 40059 // 1149 // 82.0+ // pepeatumi

Him, on the other hand...

:o


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-06 02:55:55


Thanks to everyone for the thanks!

UNSUITAIBLE ALERT!

This submission simply contains a pornographic picture and that is all.

Flag it!


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-06 03:00:36


At 3/6/07 02:55 AM, Sterockicy wrote: Thanks to everyone for the thanks!

UNSUITAIBLE ALERT!

This submission simply contains a pornographic picture and that is all.

Flag it!

Got it! Thanks for this one. I'm glad I caught this one when I did too. I saw it and thought it was unsuitable but wasn't sure.


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-06 03:08:13


Thanks for a great update!

I'm still here, just really quiet. I've managed to reach Elite Guard Lieutenant Colonel and to crack the top 200 on the B/P list. Thanks for keeping me on the list even though I don't post much. I do still read what everyone else posts and try to keep up with the news on NG.

I hope everyone else is doing well.

Keep guarding the Portal, fellow EG Barracks members. Everyone is doing a great job!

Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-06 11:02:07


Another quick post to say I spotted another mistake in your update Sterockicy- pwroftheseagoat should have 1000 points more than you have given him. I thought it was strange that he wasn't on the top 5 list when he had the highest pace of the top 300 last week!

Hopefully you can sort it and change your records, or he'll be getting a ridiculous pace in the next update with that extra thousand points! :D

*salutes*


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-06 15:38:35


At 3/6/07 01:21 AM, Sterockicy wrote: 01 // 50869 // 1069 // 76.3- // ADT

Do I need more reasons to hate you now.

02 // 48566 // 902 // 64.4- // Phantom

Not my worst, but surely not my best and I'm not pleased with it, damn it

03 // 47480 // 744 // 53.1+ // X-Naut
04 // 46405 // 659 // 47.0+ // BlueHippo

Stay back, wretched souls.

05 // 41405 // 173 // 12.3- // Major-punk

Awww, get back up

06 // 40059 // 1149 // 82.0+ // pepeatumi

Damn

At 3/6/07 01:38 AM, PenguinLink wrote: As I've said, definetly not bad. Keep up the great work.

You stink, I know it's no good and you can't help me think otherwise, I wish I had the time to improve...

At 3/6/07 01:53 AM, X-Naut wrote: I see you guys are still holding out strong.
I don't like it. >:(

You aren't doing half bad yourself, but some people are just too good at it and/or have more time/better time zone.


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-06 15:58:27


At 3/6/07 01:21 AM, Sterockicy wrote: Barracks roster – March 6, 2007

Top 5 Gainers:

Sentio – 1297
pepeatumi – 1149
dave – 1071
ADT – 1069
ArtDanVal – 1022

Congrats to the ones on this list.

Second? I'll take it. Obviously I did better than in the last update, but there's still some room for improvement I'll see if can't get that top spot by the time the next update rolls around.

05 // 41405 // 173 // 12.3- // Major-punk
06 // 40059 // 1149 // 82.0+ // pepeatumi

...Passing you this time around won't mean anything. Hope you can get your shit back together.

Thanks for the update Sterockicy


My name is pepeatumi... But you already knew that!

Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-06 16:08:13


At 3/6/07 01:21 AM, Sterockicy wrote: Well I promised I would make it today so here it is.

You sure did.

29 // 5873 // 101 // 07.2- // sixers1fan

I could pass this dude in about 2 days.

30 // 5790 // 620 // 44.2- // DarkSoldier

Finally I'm number 30!


Congratulations to all that deserve to be congratulated on this list!

Why thank you good sir!

Thanks for the update sterockicy!!!
*Salutes*

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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-06 17:32:50


At 3/6/07 01:21 AM, Sterockicy wrote: New EGB members: DarkLotusAngel, RSQViper

Rank // B/S // Gain // Gain/day // Name
42 // 1922 // NEW // NEW // DarkLotusJuggalo

I noticed I'm higher than some of the people that have been here before me, thats actually pretty cool. I would have had more points by now but submissions to the portal have been slow recently. I hope they get up to speed soon.

Congratulations to all that deserve to be congratulated on this list!

I don't think I deserve it yet but soon enough I'll be going up another rank.. maybe then?

*Salutes*


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-06 18:22:16


is eaglerock still around?

Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-06 18:40:57


I havent posted in this thread for a long ass time, but I see that I am still on the roster. I really havent gotten that many B/P in the last month or so. I've ranked up on my level. I am pretty close to getting the next B/P badge but at the rate I'm going it may take a while. If you guys want to keep me on the roster that is cool but I dont think I am going to post in the thread any more. I may change my mind, but as of right now I think I'm going to take a leave of absents. Thanks

Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-06 18:51:34


At 3/6/07 01:21 AM, Sterockicy wrote: 44 // 1690 // 009 // 00.6+ // MrAngel

I'm always at the bottom. I will probably be there for a long time. I just got the results for my G.E.D. test. I passed with a 566 average. I will most likely be really busy with computer studies and a job very soon. I may not be here often, but I will always stand behind the Elite Guard barracks in all their times of glory and hardship. Good luck in all your present and future endeavors, and may you never perish.


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-06 19:04:04


At 3/6/07 06:51 PM, MrAngel wrote:
At 3/6/07 01:21 AM, Sterockicy wrote: 44 // 1690 // 009 // 00.6+ // MrAngel
I'm always at the bottom. I will probably be there for a long time. I just got the results for my G.E.D. test. I passed with a 566 average. I will most likely be really busy with computer studies and a job very soon. I may not be here often, but I will always stand behind the Elite Guard barracks in all their times of glory and hardship. Good luck in all your present and future endeavors, and may you never perish.

Good luck with everything you are setting out to accomplish along your way as well. I hope you reach your goals with no trouble and are able to obtain the life of your dreams! If you need support then you know where to come! Good day to you sir! I wish you luck!

*Salutes*


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-06 20:31:04


At 3/6/07 06:40 PM, Sixers1fan wrote: At 3/6/07 06:51 PM, MrAngel wrote:

Good luck to you both. If one day you guys wish to return, we'll still be here with our doors open. :)

*Salutes*

Today has been an incredibly slow day. So slow, that I decided to write out a short story. :) This took me approximately one hour to brainstorm and to write out. If you guys can, please leave comments. They are very much appreciated. :)

(Warning: This story has explicit content.)

One Bullet
A short story by PenguinLink

There was this man that went with the name of Hawkeye. I have known him for quite some time now. We had been running an ammunition store for pistols and rifles for almost one year. We both came to an agreement that any money we earned would be split into us both, half and half. But that wasn’t how it went. Hawkeye took 3/4's’s of the amount we made and he only gave me the other portion. With which I barely lived off from. I hadn’t told him what the hell his problem was, or if he had forgotten the agreement we had made before we put the store up. He always gave me the excuse that he was accumulating most of the money we earned so that he could pay the Mob. A long time ago, he had asked for protection once when he had killed a member of a gang. He asked for protection from the Mob and they accepted. Hawkeye at the time did not have enough money to pay them back, but swore to them he would pay them once he had the money. The Mob agreed but with one exception, if Hawkeye didn’t pay the money before eleven months, they told him he would have a bullet pierced through his skull without him even noticing. Hawkeye accepted.

This had been going on for almost a year now. He would always take most of the money we would earn, and he would only leave me enough for food and rent. It had come to a point in which I would not take this bullshit anymore and I threatened him. I told him if he wouldn’t give me half of the money we earned by the next time our money would be distributed to us, I would have no other choice but to kill him. Hawkeye shrugged and said “So be it”. So the day came. I loaded up my pistol, with one bullet only, because loading my gun with more than one seemed useless to me. One bullet was enough to kill him, I said.

I walked out of my apartment. It was a cool, breezy night. I knew where Hawkeye lived, because we would sometimes distribute our money there. I walked over to his apartment, having made up my mind. I wasn’t feeling nervous or reluctant, I had made up my mind, and I was sick of this. I went up the stairs to his apartment, and I knocked twice. Moments later, he asked with a broad voice who was it. I told him it was me. He told me to come in. I opened the door and there he was, counting the money we had earned during the past few months.

He picked up a slim stack of money from his desk and he held it out to me. I looked at him with such hatred that he asked me what the hell was wrong. I was so angered by his question that I snatched the money from his hand and threw it on the floor. I yelled at him. Fuck you! Fuck that shit! I don’t want any of that shit! Hawkeye looked at me in bewilderment. I was even more angered by that look that I took out my pistol and pointed it at his forehead. I yelled at him once again. “I told you bitch! I told you I was going to kill your ass! I’m so sick of this shit! Hawkeye then smiled. He replied, “Aren’t we all.”

I smacked him across the head with my pistol and he fell towards his leather chair. He clutched his head and I saw blood streaming down the side of his forehead. “I’m not fucking around! This shit has gone for far too long!” I hold out the pistol to his forehead once again, my finger on the trigger. The one bullet was inside the gun, waiting to be fired and end a life. Hawkeye’s expression was of terror. He looked at me with frightened eyes. I was breathing heavily and my face had turned red with anger. Tears were streaming down Hawkeye’s eyes. But I didn’t give a shit. I was destined to kill him. I put my finger on the trigger. I was seconds before pressing it that I completely froze. I looked at the poor man weeping with terror. I thought to myself: What am I doing? Why am I pointing this gun at this man’s head for? Why am I going to ruin my life within a split second?

I kept pointing the gun at Hawkeye until I just let my arm fall. I looked at him for a long time, he was weeping, holding his hands over his ears, rocking in his leather chair, waiting for me to pull the trigger. I put the gun on his desk and he screamed and jumped in fright. I looked at him for the last time, with a sad expression on my face, and I walked slowly away from the apartment. I was about to leave the place when I looked at him one last time and I saw him staring at me. Muttering “Thank you” over and over. I turned over and shut the door behind me. I went down the stairs and I heard a gunshot. I ran up the stairs and saw he had shot himself. He was lying down on the floor, with a puddle of blood formed around his head. I could not help but think it was my fault he had killed himself. But then something caught my eye. I looked at his calendar that was hung in his wall and I saw that the date of today was circled in red. I ran towards the calendar and saw that in the date that was circled in red were inscribed the following words: “Last day”.

I looked at these two words in terror when I heard a muffled voice behind me. I turned around and I saw two men dressed in black, each one of them holding an Uzi. “Thanks for doing our bloody job.” One of them said. “Now get the fuck out before we kill you as well.” I looked at them with bewilderment and confusion. “But before you leave, tell us where he used to keep the money.” I pointed at a safe towards the corner of the room. I told him the code was in a piece of paper on his desk. The Men walked towards the desk and I didn’t hesitate to leave. I walked briskly out of the room, and then I looked once more at the room.

The Men were shuffling through some papers that were of Hawkeye’s and then I saw something that killed me. I would never forget this sight. I saw the capsule of the one bullet on the floor. The one bullet that could have prevented this of ever happening. I walked out before I started weeping in front of the men. I was going down the stairs when I heard one of them say “Well, what do you? The man did have all the money saved up.” I stopped dead in my tracks and them for a minute I wanted to be dead. Tears were streaming down my face, thinking why had I been such a fool. Today will always leave a mark in my life, and I don’t know how I will live on with this day in my conscience. I pulled the hat down I was wearing so that people would not look at my face and I kept on walking, tears still streaming down my face. I never knew that one bullet could change so many lives.

Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-06 21:08:56


At 3/6/07 08:31 PM, PenguinLink wrote:
Today has been an incredibly slow day. So slow, that I decided to write out a short story. :) This took me approximately one hour to brainstorm and to write out. If you guys can, please leave comments. They are very much appreciated. :)

It's been terrible- so far I think I've only got 50 points! I can't remember the last time it was this slow.

One Bullet
A short story by PenguinLink

Ok, the good first. The story is extremely imaginative, and you describe the emotions very well. It is the kind of short story that works- not too much character development, just one simple concept well described and a nice ending that has a twist and a bit of a moral to it. You have a very creative mind.

Now for a bit of constructive criticism, and this is pretty much entirely based on writing style and grammar techniques to make it a more fluent and enjoyable read. Don't take it the wrong way, they are just little tips that I hope will help you to improve :)

1) Do not start consecutive sentences with the same word- it makes it sound a lot like a list of events and totally destroys the flow. In one of the later paragraphs there are about 5 sentences in a row that start with 'I' for example. Try and change the sentence order or some up with a different word and it will flow a lot better.

2) Avoid using too many short sentences in a row. Towards the beginning in particular there are a lot of sentences of less than a line, and again it damages the flow of the story. It is a technique that can be used to convey shock or fear very well, but for general narrative you are better off using connecting words like 'but' and 'and', and also commas and semi colons.

3) There are a few places where you didn't use speech marks when a character is talking. Not the end of the world, it's just a small punctuation error.

4) Speaking of punctuation errors... there are a few places that need semi colons rather than going into a whole new sentence. A general rule of thumb is if your next sentence is directly describing what you said in the previous one it is better with a semi colon. Example:
'This had been going on for almost a year now. He would always take most of the money we would earn, and he would only leave me enough for food and rent'
A semi colon between the 'now' and the 'He' rather than a new sentence would flow better.

5) There was one case where you used 'but' and didn't put a comma before it. 'But' should always have a comma in front of it, and also you should avoid starting sentences with it, although it can be used to start a sentence as an added emphasis.

One thing you have improved from the last story is repetition of the same word, so that is certainly a good thing :).

On the whole I liked it, and I enjoy seeing the creative work of that warped mind of yours. Keep practicing and take a few of these tips into account and you can be a really good writer :)

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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-06 22:15:33


At 3/6/07 09:08 PM, Sentio wrote:
It's been terrible- so far I think I've only got 50 points! I can't remember the last time it was this slow.

Indeed, it has been terrible. I have acquired like, 25 Points. :( My pace isn't going to be so good on the update this Saturday. >:(

Ok, the good first. The story is extremely imaginative, and you describe the emotions very well. It is the kind of short story that works- not too much character development, just one simple concept well described and a nice ending that has a twist and a bit of a moral to it. You have a very creative mind.

Thanks for taking the time to read it. I appreaciate it. And thanks a lot for the nice comments. :)

Now for a bit of constructive criticism, and this is pretty much entirely based on writing style and grammar techniques to make it a more fluent and enjoyable read. Don't take it the wrong way, they are just little tips that I hope will help you to improve :)

Ok, I am ready. *PenguinLink looks at the list of connstructive criticism and he bangs his head on his keyboard* Kidding. :)

1) Do not start consecutive sentences with the same word- it makes it sound a lot like a list of events and totally destroys the flow. In one of the later paragraphs there are about 5 sentences in a row that start with 'I' for example. Try and change the sentence order or some up with a different word and it will flow a lot better.

Yes, I agree. My vocabulary isn't too up to date, as you can see. So I find it difficult to vary the words I choose. I wish I had your sophisticated vocabulary. :(

2) Avoid using too many short sentences in a row. Towards the beginning in particular there are a lot of sentences of less than a line, and again it damages the flow of the story. It is a technique that can be used to convey shock or fear very well, but for general narrative you are better off using connecting words like 'but' and 'and', and also commas and semi colons.

Actually, that was the style of the piece. I wrote this story using the literary style of writing that is minimalism. Literary works that have minimalism incorporated into them tend to have very little to no detail and very short structured sentences. Although I see this story doesn't convey this style very much, I tried. :(

3) There are a few places where you didn't use speech marks when a character is talking. Not the end of the world, it's just a small punctuation error.

Yes, I noticed. Grammar apparently isn't one of my strong points. :(

4) Speaking of punctuation errors... there are a few places that need semi colons rather than going into a whole new sentence. A general rule of thumb is if your next sentence is directly describing what you said in the previous one it is better with a semi colon. Example:
'This had been going on for almost a year now. He would always take most of the money we would earn, and he would only leave me enough for food and rent'
A semi colon between the 'now' and the 'He' rather than a new sentence would flow better.

Yes, I noticed that as well. Also taking into consideration I wrote this in a short amount of time, I actually didn't take out the time to proofread every sentence and look for any lack of grammar attributes.

5) There was one case where you used 'but' and didn't put a comma before it. 'But' should always have a comma in front of it, and also you should avoid starting sentences with it, although it can be used to start a sentence as an added emphasis.

Yes, that's true. I just couldn't find any other word to start the sentence with. And the comma, darn it. Forgot to include it. :(

One thing you have improved from the last story is repetition of the same word, so that is certainly a good thing :).

Well, mostly, because you stated I used the word "I" many times in a section of the story. But I'm still trying to vary my vocabulary, nonetheless. :) There I go again, using But as a start of a sentence! >:(

On the whole I liked it, and I enjoy seeing the creative work of that warped mind of yours. Keep practicing and take a few of these tips into account and you can be a really good writer :)

Once again, thanks a lot for your words, Sentio, They really help me out and I thank you for taking the time to read the story and specifically criticize the aspects that were lacking and needed improvment upon. Thanks buddy. :)

*salutes*

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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-07 01:59:38


At 3/6/07 10:15 PM, PenguinLink wrote:
Indeed, it has been terrible. I have acquired like, 25 Points. :( My pace isn't going to be so good on the update this Saturday. >:(

Still no better- 70 points for a day that I've been online for pretty much the entirety of is very sad.

Yes, I agree. My vocabulary isn't too up to date, as you can see. So I find it difficult to vary the words I choose. I wish I had your sophisticated vocabulary. :(

It's less a case of vocabulary as sentence structure- try and rearrange it to start with different words. A small thing it may be, but it makes a big difference when reading it. Also, the best way to improve vocabulary is to read a lot, and from past discussions I gather you do that, so you'll get better all the time. It's something that comes with time and use.

Actually, that was the style of the piece. I wrote this story using the literary style of writing that is minimalism. Literary works that have minimalism incorporated into them tend to have very little to no detail and very short structured sentences. Although I see this story doesn't convey this style very much, I tried. :(

Well if it was deliberate then thats ok :). Like I said it's a very good way to convey fear or surprise, but it's a little strange to see it used for narrative- in fact I don't think I've ever seen it. I guess if that was what you were going for then there was a little too much description as that comes across better in long, flowing sentences. If you try that approach again focus entirely on the emotions and it could work. It's certainly an interesting idea!

Yes, I noticed. Grammar apparently isn't one of my strong points. :(

That was less grammar, more just a slip, most likely from writing it fast. If you take a few minutes to check over it you'd be sure to see that. Maybe take a bit more time over it in future :)

Yes, I noticed that as well. Also taking into consideration I wrote this in a short amount of time, I actually didn't take out the time to proofread every sentence and look for any lack of grammar attributes.

Semi colons are something I pick up on a lot (ask Phantom!), although I get lazy and use dashes when I post. With the minimalist style you were going for they're less important, but they do help to string things together and make it flow.

Yes, that's true. I just couldn't find any other word to start the sentence with. And the comma, darn it. Forgot to include it. :(

Hehe, just me being picky :). If I'm going to give constructive criticism I may as well try and catch everything! 'But' can be used to start a sentence, just avoid it if possible. The same rule applies for 'and'.

Well, mostly, because you stated I used the word "I" many times in a section of the story. But I'm still trying to vary my vocabulary, nonetheless. :) There I go again, using But as a start of a sentence! >:(

Repeating the same word is different to using a common word to start a lot of sentences. Both are tricks I was taught when I first started writing by the best English teacher I ever had (aged 10). Since then I am always subconsciously checking that I don't start consecutive sentences with the same word, and don't repeat things- it comes naturally now. Another trick I use is to be thinking a sentence or two ahead, which means I write faster, and spot repetition before I get to it. I also think over every word and phrase to come up with the best way to say something, and check back over sentences just after a write them rather than all at the end. Checking for errors as you go tends to be far more effective as you tend to skim when you look over it all at the end.

Once again, thanks a lot for your words, Sentio, They really help me out and I thank you for taking the time to read the story and specifically criticize the aspects that were lacking and needed improvment upon. Thanks buddy. :)

There is no point reviewing something if you can't suggest a few improvements. Like I said, don't take it the wrong way- it was very good. There are just a few little things you should think about in future :). Hopefully it will make you a better writer.

*Salutes*

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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-07 02:11:20


At 3/7/07 01:59 AM, Sentio wrote:
At 3/6/07 10:15 PM, PenguinLink wrote:
Indeed, it has been terrible. I have acquired like, 25 Points. :( My pace isn't going to be so good on the update this Saturday. >:(
Still no better- 70 points for a day that I've been online for pretty much the entirety of is very sad.

Oh thats really sad. I have also noticed how slow the portal has been. I Slept for 8 hours straight last night, woke up saying "OH SHIT, OH SHIT", went online to find that I hadnt missed and UJ submissions. Then I went to school for 8 hours, got home and I had only missed 15 submissions. That is really really REALLY SLOW! Anyway, I hope the portal speeds up soon, I have tommorow off from school (I am having a syst removed from my ear lobe) and I want to rack up some points before the weekend.

Show us what you've got portal!

*Salutes*

P.S: I recently applied to become a review mod (ramagi asked) and I put a few of you guys names down as references, You probably didnt get a PM from her but if you did you now know what its about and you know, Tell her how great I am, etc. :-P (Jokes) Although the chances of me becoming a review mod are EXTREMELY slim, I thought I would take up the oppertuanity of applying and maybe just maybe I might get the job. And now I wait! Its so tense.


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At 3/6/07 06:22 PM, Legend wrote: is eaglerock still around?

No, sadly he's busy and I am running things in his absence.

At 3/6/07 08:31 PM, PenguinLink wrote: One Bullet
A short story by PenguinLink

It's good that you picked up writing, and about the story, I have nothing to say Sentio hasn't said already. :-P

*Gets away with not reading it*

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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-07 09:02:48


Did eaglerock quit or something?

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At 3/7/07 09:02 AM, Legend wrote: Did eaglerock quit or something?

No, and I'd appreciate it if you could lengthen your posts while you're here too. Eagle is just busy with work and married life, he is still a technical and honorable member.


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-07 10:24:12


At 3/7/07 01:59 AM, Sentio wrote:
There is no point reviewing something if you can't suggest a few improvements. Like I said, don't take it the wrong way- it was very good. There are just a few little things you should think about in future :). Hopefully it will make you a better writer.

Thanks a lot for the comments. =) I will take them into consideration the next time I plan on writing something. I didn't take it the wrong way- I actually enjoy getting feedback like this because it helps me understand in what aspects I can improve upon. :) Thanks, Sentio! :D

*salutes*

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At 3/7/07 02:11 AM, Sterockicy wrote:
Oh thats really sad. I have also noticed how slow the portal has been. :

Yes, the portal was very slow yesterday. I hope today it speeds things up.

P.S: I recently applied to become a review mod (ramagi asked) and I put a few of you guys names down as references,

Yes, I did see she made a post about that in the abusive thread. I wish you the best of luck. :)

At 3/7/07 07:42 AM, Phantom wrote:
It's good that you picked up writing, and about the story, I have nothing to say Sentio hasn't said already. :-P

Thanks.

*Gets away with not reading it*

Oh, how nice of you. :)

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At 3/6/07 01:21 AM, Sterockicy wrote:
Well I promised I would make it today so here it is.

Thanks for doing it again. =)

Sentio – 1297
pepeatumi – 1149
dave – 1071
ADT – 1069
ArtDanVal – 1022

Congrats to you five on reaching over 1000 b/p since the last update.

Special congratulations: Sentio, Second time as No.1 Gainer!

Whoo!

New EGB members: DarkLotusAngel, RSQViper

Welcome and nice to see you again.

04 // 46405 // 659 // 47.0+ // BlueHippo

This will take awhile, at least 3 months to reach 46k and then another few months to make up the difference hes gained in that time.

05 // 41405 // 173 // 12.3- // Major-punk

Good news: I'm back at home.
Bad news: This pace stinks.
Good news: My pace will improve drastically.

06 // 40059 // 1149 // 82.0+ // pepeatumi

Congrats on passing 40k, it's good to see your back on track.

At 3/6/07 01:53 AM, X-Naut wrote: 05 // 41405 // 173 // 12.3- // Major-punk
Won't be much of a threat.

Not this year.

Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-07 16:25:37


At 3/6/07 03:38 PM, Phantom wrote:
At 3/6/07 01:21 AM, Sterockicy wrote: 01 // 50869 // 1069 // 76.3- // ADT
Do I need more reasons to hate you now.

I'm still waiting for you to pass me up like you said you where going to do! :)

Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-07 16:33:46


At 3/7/07 04:10 PM, Major-punk wrote: Congrats on passing 40k, it's good to see your back on track.

Thanks. and its good to know that you're back home... At least until you start getting a high amount of B/P and make it more difficult for me to catch you.


My name is pepeatumi... But you already knew that!

Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-07 16:34:09


At 3/7/07 10:24 AM, PenguinLink wrote:
At 3/7/07 02:11 AM, Sterockicy wrote:
Oh thats really sad. I have also noticed how slow the portal has been. :
Yes, the portal was very slow yesterday. I hope today it speeds things up.

I wonder why? Cmon portal, I am ready for you today. I promise I will vote on all if your submissions :-)

P.S: I recently applied to become a review mod (ramagi asked) and I put a few of you guys names down as references,
Yes, I did see she made a post about that in the abusive thread. I wish you the best of luck. :)

Thanks for the luck! I would really love to help out Newgrounds even more by being a mod!

At 3/7/07 04:10 PM, Major-punk wrote:
At 3/6/07 01:21 AM, Sterockicy wrote:
Well I promised I would make it today so here it is.
Thanks for doing it again. =)

No problems Major-punk. I am happy to do it as long as I need to.

Good news: I'm back at home.
Bad news: This pace stinks.
Good news: My pace will improve drastically.

Thats great news! I am really glad everything has worked it self out and your at home again. Now its time for you to get that pace back up!

At 3/7/07 04:25 PM, ADT wrote:
At 3/6/07 03:38 PM, Phantom wrote:
At 3/6/07 01:21 AM, Sterockicy wrote: 01 // 50869 // 1069 // 76.3- // ADT
Do I need more reasons to hate you now.
I'm still waiting for you to pass me up like you said you where going to do! :)

*"OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH" Followed by an eery silence, Awaited Phantom's comeback. " This is like being in TV show studio audience!"*

*Salutes*


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-07 18:53:31


ah, I apologize phantom, I was an old member, and a good friend of eaglerocks, I see no one here remembers me.

I didn't see what else to say, i was hoping to talk to eagle, and I don't really know you that well, except that you regard yourself in very high esteem >.>

Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-07 19:01:32


Ok, a few little things, and I'm too lazy to quote...

The portal is still rubbish, though I've been horribly busy today at work as well, which hasn't helped. 20 points so far today :(. At this rate I might not even get 75 per day this week, which is terrible given the crazy amount of time I spend on here!

It's good to hear you're getting back on your feet Major-Punk, and it will be good to see you around here a bit more in the coming weeks :)

Good luck to Sterockicy on applying to be a review mod- you're work in the abusive review thread will be sure to put you in good stead as a candidate, and I'll be sure to put in a good word if Ramagi comes calling. I'm actually tempted to apply myself- although I don't do as much in the abusive review thread I do have the insane hours I spend on this site on my side, and I'd like to have something else to do around my B/Ping :)

And I got my 12000th save earlier, not that I really care that much. They are still catching my blams, though not as fast as they were. I still lose a huge number every day by voting 0 on spam submissions that go on to pass.

I might do a bit of writing this evening after PenguinLinks little story last night- I'll be sure to point you towards the Mafia if I do end up posting something.

*salutes*


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-07 19:28:36


At 3/7/07 04:10 PM, Major-punk wrote:
Good news: I'm back at home.
Bad news: This pace stinks.
Good news: My pace will improve drastically.

It's nice hearing you got everything suited out, Major-punk. And don't worry about your pace stinking- I'm sure once you get back on your feet you will be owning once again. :)

At 3/7/07 04:25 PM, ADT wrote:
I'm still waiting for you to pass me up like you said you where going to do! :)

Haha, that's what I'm talking about! We need some more smart talkin' around here! :D

At 3/7/07 04:34 PM, Sterockicy wrote:
*"OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH" Followed by an eery silence, Awaited Phantom's comeback. " This is like being in TV show studio audience!"*

At first I thought you were groaning, but then I realized you were making that "ooo" sound when someone makes a comeback or says something rude to someone. Sorry, long day in School. :(

At 3/7/07 07:01 PM, Sentio wrote:
Ok, a few little things, and I'm too lazy to quote...

Laziness, my friend, is something we all understand. :)

The portal is still rubbish, though I've been horribly busy today at work as well, which hasn't helped. 20 points so far today :(. At this rate I might not even get 75 per day this week, which is terrible given the crazy amount of time I spend on here!

The Portal has still been rubbish today but I see a slight improvement over yesterday. The Portal yesterday was horrible. 20 Points isn't so bad considering you're awfully busy. If I were to be busy like yourself, I won't count on even acquiring a single point. And about making the 75 Per Day list, I still think you have the opportunity to make it. Other members like me have no chance in doing so, though. :(

I'm actually tempted to apply myself- although I don't do as much in the abusive review thread I do have the insane hours I spend on this site on my side, and I'd like to have something else to do around my B/Ping :)

I can picture you as a review mod but I can establish a more precise, fitting picture of you as a BBS Mod. I have seen you spend most of the time here on the forums and you would provide great correlation of cleaning up the place. Anyway, give it shot! You won't lose anything, will you? :)

And I got my 12000th save earlier, not that I really care that much. They are still catching my blams, though not as fast as they were. I still lose a huge number every day by voting 0 on spam submissions that go on to pass.

Congratulations on your 12,000th save, buddy! :D When I started B/Ping, my blams were a greater substantial amount than that of my saves and look at me now. My Saves have greatly surpassed my blams. Quite interesting, eh?

I might do a bit of writing this evening after PenguinLinks little story last night- I'll be sure to point you towards the Mafia if I do end up posting something.

Great! I'll be looking foward to it. What a great chance would it be to pay you back for the helpful assistance you gave me yesterday. As a matter of fact, you were the only one who cared to look at it and write out helpful comments, something I won't forget. :)

*salutes*

*Salutes*

Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-03-07 19:36:02


At 3/7/07 07:28 PM, PenguinLink wrote:
At 3/7/07 04:25 PM, ADT wrote:
I'm still waiting for you to pass me up like you said you where going to do! :)
Haha, that's what I'm talking about! We need some more smart talkin' around here! :D

i iz souper sart butt u iz dum!

lol