So, we just recently had a thread by the brave @QueenSolomon about what not to do when making self-insert characters, and while that thread has been unlocked, I still want to go forward with the ideas I had for how spin it off into something more constructive. I might make some more threads about the topic of self-inserts/online personas, but for now I’m going to zero in on one aspect I have realized is really important.
You see, I’m working on revamping my “Cass” persona (planning on returning to this thread with an attempt at synthesizing the ideas people gave me), and it’s been really daunting so far.
What I realized very recently was wrong with my persona rework is that there wasn’t really a strong concept of her identity to define her design. Therefore, to make a self-insert, you first need to figure out what exactly they are and make it succinct. Because of who I am, I also pay special attention to characters’ fashion sense, and try to define it in case I want to put them in more than one outfit.
Some of my self-insert examples, characters I made to express myself in different ways:
- Theta is a space zombie bodyguard, wearing a lot of black leather with neon accents like… almost cybergoth or cyberpunk, in a way?
- Maron is a sleep paralysis demon, with a body made of black goo, who possesses emotion-driven shapeshifting capabilities. Her design is especially simple so that it can be changed in many different ways.
- Jamie is the personality of an angry young man put in a woman’s body, with some industrial rock aesthetics.
- The previous Cass (an accurate depiction of me irl) is a bespectacled dork with an unremarkable fashion sense. (I need to experiment with clothes more :’) )
And a couple examples from friends and acquaintances:
- @M-kirbs’ Marie is a comfortably dressed dimensional traveler. Her outfits make it easy to see her upbeat personality at a glance, and the rounded shapes and pastel colors of her design are a perfect contrast with her spiky evil mirror counterpart, Mace (who I helped design! :3)
- @TheGarbager619’s Garbo is designed to be this chubby, scruffy loser, with messy clothing to further the point. But he’s an endearing loser. I think Garbager is trying to make him less of a loser, to be less self-deprecating? Good for him.
- @Skoops’s depiction of himself is a slightly insane-looking guy who lives in a trash can.
You get the idea.
Compare that to the rework of Cass:
What exactly is she? A demon? Zombie/undead? Mercenary? There’s a bunch of details that hint at different ideas, but none of those are consistent throughout the entire design. I think the problem was that I was so emotionally attached to the idea of her “looking evil” that I didn’t have any idea of what she was beyond that.
While I’m working on creating something concrete to build from, I want you all to describe your own personas or self-inserts in a sentence or phrase. How do you present yourself to the internet, effectively?
Someone please help me revive my clubs
