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What Do You Think Of My Jazz Music

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Response to What Do You Think Of My Jazz Music 2025-01-21 15:16:20


At 1/21/25 03:12 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:
At 1/21/25 03:11 PM, Troisnyx wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:54 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:51 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:48 PM, Troisnyx wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:40 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:39 PM, Troisnyx wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:37 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:I don't think you can hear the dynamics because this is the drums LOOK THE 2 AND THE 4 ARE LOUDER

You know that's not all there is to dynamics, right?

Obviously

Then why are we not hearing it?

If even on a phone speaker we can perceive them, even on something as brassy as Sing Sing Sing, then it's significant that I would point it out now

You really think the only way to have dynamics is to lower the entire song? each note has it's own dynamics. Also adding more notes on beat affects the dynamics too.

I literary just posted a new track with the same exact instrument piano only and the audio visual reader LITTERARY SHOWS the dynamics

Right, let's approach this another way

Listen to your own song on your phone

Then Sing, Sing, Sing

Then spot any mixing differences

No, prove to me you can do stride piano music better than me


Already did x


At 1/21/25 03:13 PM, Troisnyx wrote:
At 1/21/25 03:01 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:57 PM, Troisnyx wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:51 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:48 PM, Troisnyx wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:40 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:39 PM, Troisnyx wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:37 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:I don't think you can hear the dynamics because this is the drums LOOK THE 2 AND THE 4 ARE LOUDER

You know that's not all there is to dynamics, right?

Obviously

Then why are we not hearing it?

If even on a phone speaker we can perceive them, even on something as brassy as Sing Sing Sing, then it's significant that I would point it out now

You really think the only way to have dynamics is to lower the entire song? each note has it's own dynamics. Also adding more notes on beat affects the dynamics too.

Don't need to mansplain that to me, that's not what I'm hearing in the end result

The loud emphases are not loud and in your face, the whole piece is in your face which is not par for the course even with brassy things

And I might add, if your response to someone about not having a good piano is anything to go by, there is a great free piano, called Soundpaint 1928 Steinway

There are exceptional free things, and @LD-W has flagged them on a regular basis even on the contest servers, all you need to do is look

I'll like to hear you do stride piano music since your a know it all!

Already done as one of the level themes in this game, next


Why don't you just share the audio? the link doesnt work. my garbage pc can't run the game

Response to What Do You Think Of My Jazz Music 2025-01-21 15:21:08


At 1/21/25 03:16 PM, Troisnyx wrote:
At 1/21/25 03:12 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:
At 1/21/25 03:11 PM, Troisnyx wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:54 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:51 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:48 PM, Troisnyx wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:40 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:39 PM, Troisnyx wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:37 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:I don't think you can hear the dynamics because this is the drums LOOK THE 2 AND THE 4 ARE LOUDER

You know that's not all there is to dynamics, right?

Obviously

Then why are we not hearing it?

If even on a phone speaker we can perceive them, even on something as brassy as Sing Sing Sing, then it's significant that I would point it out now

You really think the only way to have dynamics is to lower the entire song? each note has it's own dynamics. Also adding more notes on beat affects the dynamics too.

I literary just posted a new track with the same exact instrument piano only and the audio visual reader LITTERARY SHOWS the dynamics

Right, let's approach this another way

Listen to your own song on your phone

Then Sing, Sing, Sing

Then spot any mixing differences

No, prove to me you can do stride piano music better than me

Already did x


THe LINK DOESNT work. You hidding now?

Response to What Do You Think Of My Jazz Music 2025-01-21 15:24:47


At 1/21/25 03:16 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:
At 1/21/25 03:13 PM, Troisnyx wrote:
At 1/21/25 03:01 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:57 PM, Troisnyx wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:51 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:48 PM, Troisnyx wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:40 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:39 PM, Troisnyx wrote:
At 1/21/25 02:37 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:I don't think you can hear the dynamics because this is the drums LOOK THE 2 AND THE 4 ARE LOUDER

You know that's not all there is to dynamics, right?

Obviously

Then why are we not hearing it?

If even on a phone speaker we can perceive them, even on something as brassy as Sing Sing Sing, then it's significant that I would point it out now

You really think the only way to have dynamics is to lower the entire song? each note has it's own dynamics. Also adding more notes on beat affects the dynamics too.

Don't need to mansplain that to me, that's not what I'm hearing in the end result

The loud emphases are not loud and in your face, the whole piece is in your face which is not par for the course even with brassy things

And I might add, if your response to someone about not having a good piano is anything to go by, there is a great free piano, called Soundpaint 1928 Steinway

There are exceptional free things, and @LD-W has flagged them on a regular basis even on the contest servers, all you need to do is look

I'll like to hear you do stride piano music since your a know it all!

Already done as one of the level themes in this game, next

Why don't you just share the audio? the link doesnt work. my garbage pc can't run the game


Too bad 😘 The judges at GDevelop gave us second place out of 125, a score that included the audio


Next time you'd do well to know who to pick a fight with

Response to What Do You Think Of My Jazz Music 2025-01-21 15:30:44


At 1/21/25 03:21 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:THe LINK DOESNT work. You hidding now?


If you were as smart as you keep implying you are you'd have removed an HTTPS from the link because there were two

Response to What Do You Think Of My Jazz Music 2025-01-21 15:33:03


Hi OP

This thread got messy…

If you’re going to ask for constructive criticism on your jazz, don’t get defensive when you get it. If you accept it, take it in stride, and apply the advice you get on your songs, you’ll find that improvement comes much quicker.

@Troisnyx is an extremely talented composer and musician who knows what she’s talking about… you’re actually pretty lucky to be getting advice from someone as skilled.

So, my two cents, stop arguing and start improving! 😁


you guys like my tunes?

BBS Signature

Response to What Do You Think Of My Jazz Music 2025-01-21 15:34:37


At 1/21/25 03:33 PM, OVERSCORE wrote:Hi OP
This thread got messy…
If you’re going to ask for constructive criticism on your jazz, don’t get defensive when you get it. If you accept it, take it in stride, and apply the advice you get on your songs, you’ll find that improvement comes much quicker.
@Troisnyx is an extremely talented composer and musician who knows what she’s talking about… you’re actually pretty lucky to be getting advice from someone as skilled.
So, my two cents, stop arguing and start improving! 😁


biased opinion

Response to What Do You Think Of My Jazz Music 2025-01-21 15:36:31


At 1/21/25 03:33 PM, OVERSCORE wrote:Hi OP
This thread got messy…
If you’re going to ask for constructive criticism on your jazz, don’t get defensive when you get it. If you accept it, take it in stride, and apply the advice you get on your songs, you’ll find that improvement comes much quicker.
@Troisnyx is an extremely talented composer and musician who knows what she’s talking about… you’re actually pretty lucky to be getting advice from someone as skilled.
So, my two cents, stop arguing and start improving! 😁


Thank you Overscore


This is literally what I've been trying to do


The whole point of listening to Sing, Sing, Sing on the phone is to train the ear to spot differences, and it is not a decision we arrive at just like that, it's about acclimatising to listening for details, including things that don't sound quite right


And if that sounds good on the phone, that's goals and if we could do that even with free instruments and software defaults (which, I do on the regular), that would be really nice, because brasses are hard to get right


That's where I was going with this


I never wanted this turned into a battle of wills, ever


At 1/21/25 03:36 PM, Troisnyx wrote:
At 1/21/25 03:33 PM, OVERSCORE wrote:Hi OP
This thread got messy…
If you’re going to ask for constructive criticism on your jazz, don’t get defensive when you get it. If you accept it, take it in stride, and apply the advice you get on your songs, you’ll find that improvement comes much quicker.
@Troisnyx is an extremely talented composer and musician who knows what she’s talking about… you’re actually pretty lucky to be getting advice from someone as skilled.
So, my two cents, stop arguing and start improving! 😁

Thank you Overscore

This is literally what I've been trying to do

The whole point of listening to Sing, Sing, Sing on the phone is to train the ear to spot differences, and it is not a decision we arrive at just like that, it's about acclimatising to listening for details, including things that don't sound quite right

And if that sounds good on the phone, that's goals and if we could do that even with free instruments and software defaults (which, I do on the regular), that would be really nice, because brasses are hard to get right

That's where I was going with this

I never wanted this turned into a battle of wills, ever


Yea, I think I'm done with newgrounds. I quit bb. I always get compared to a professional(one who gets paid doing this) when I just do this for fun so bb

Response to What Do You Think Of My Jazz Music 2025-01-21 15:54:15


At 1/21/25 03:40 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:
At 1/21/25 03:36 PM, Troisnyx wrote:
At 1/21/25 03:33 PM, OVERSCORE wrote:Hi OP
This thread got messy…
If you’re going to ask for constructive criticism on your jazz, don’t get defensive when you get it. If you accept it, take it in stride, and apply the advice you get on your songs, you’ll find that improvement comes much quicker.
@Troisnyx is an extremely talented composer and musician who knows what she’s talking about… you’re actually pretty lucky to be getting advice from someone as skilled.
So, my two cents, stop arguing and start improving! 😁

Thank you Overscore

This is literally what I've been trying to do

The whole point of listening to Sing, Sing, Sing on the phone is to train the ear to spot differences, and it is not a decision we arrive at just like that, it's about acclimatising to listening for details, including things that don't sound quite right

And if that sounds good on the phone, that's goals and if we could do that even with free instruments and software defaults (which, I do on the regular), that would be really nice, because brasses are hard to get right

That's where I was going with this

I never wanted this turned into a battle of wills, ever

Yea, I think I'm done with newgrounds. I quit bb. I always get compared to a professional(one who gets paid doing this) when I just do this for fun so bb


Aw bro that’s not the spirit, we all just want to help you improve and create the best music you can. But if that’s the mindset you’re going to have…


you guys like my tunes?

BBS Signature

Response to What Do You Think Of My Jazz Music 2025-01-25 19:11:26


At 1/19/25 06:28 PM, Ongokiller50 wrote:https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/1393606
I made it myself in lmms. I rarely get front paged now :(


You’ve definitely got the style down, it just needs some better mixing and some more emotion as many say. Just practice my guy. And I feel you, I can never get frontpaged XD


I like making music because making music is something I like

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