At 2/11/24 11:59 AM, Gribbus07 wrote:I wake up
I take a shit
I get out of bed
That's not a haiku
They need five, seven, and five
syllables to count
I'm just one of those people still on the path of getting themselves out there in the world. If you're confused by my mug below you haven't read my profile. I point you to it.
At 2/11/24 02:32 PM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 11:59 AM, Gribbus07 wrote:I wake up
I take a shit
I get out of bed
That's not a haiku
They need five, seven, and five
syllables to count
ok I get it
I wont make something stupid
like that ever again
Toger...
O Thomas Dolby,
Hyperactive in my head
All day and all night.
At 2/11/24 02:47 PM, Gribbus07 wrote:At 2/11/24 02:32 PM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 11:59 AM, Gribbus07 wrote:I wake up
I take a shit
I get out of bed
That's not a haiku
They need five, seven, and five
syllables to count
ok I get it
I wont make something stupid
like that ever again
That's alright, I've made
that mistake before, even
in an image too
I'm just one of those people still on the path of getting themselves out there in the world. If you're confused by my mug below you haven't read my profile. I point you to it.
At 2/11/24 08:13 PM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 02:47 PM, Gribbus07 wrote:At 2/11/24 02:32 PM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 11:59 AM, Gribbus07 wrote:I wake up
I take a shit
I get out of bed
That's not a haiku
They need five, seven, and five
syllables to count
ok I get it
I wont make something stupid
like that ever again
That's alright, I've made
that mistake before, even
in an image too
What's really funny
Is that most of what we write
Here is not haiku.
It's a cynical,
Humorous poem about
Life called senryū.
...But seriously,
Do you pull an Amber Heard
In your own bed? Gross!
At 2/11/24 11:45 PM, ChronoNomad wrote:At 2/11/24 08:13 PM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 02:47 PM, Gribbus07 wrote:At 2/11/24 02:32 PM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 11:59 AM, Gribbus07 wrote:I wake up
I take a shit
I get out of bed
That's not a haiku
They need five, seven, and five
syllables to count
ok I get it
I wont make something stupid
like that ever again
That's alright, I've made
that mistake before, even
in an image too
What's really funny
Is that most of what we write
Here is not haiku.
It's a cynical,
Humorous poem about
Life called senryū.
@Gribbus07
...But seriously,
Do you pull an Amber Heard
In your own bed? Gross!
A true haiku can
only be properly done
in Japan's language
I'm just one of those people still on the path of getting themselves out there in the world. If you're confused by my mug below you haven't read my profile. I point you to it.
Fear is there to provoke..
To show you what reside within
your courage.
*Sip tea*
ZombieGhost
At 2/12/24 12:56 AM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 11:45 PM, ChronoNomad wrote:At 2/11/24 08:13 PM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 02:47 PM, Gribbus07 wrote:At 2/11/24 02:32 PM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 11:59 AM, Gribbus07 wrote:I wake up
I take a shit
I get out of bed
That's not a haiku
They need five, seven, and five
syllables to count
ok I get it
I wont make something stupid
like that ever again
That's alright, I've made
that mistake before, even
in an image too
What's really funny
Is that most of what we write
Here is not haiku.
It's a cynical,
Humorous poem about
Life called senryū.
@Gribbus07
...But seriously,
Do you pull an Amber Heard
In your own bed? Gross!
A true haiku can
only be properly done
in Japan's language
There’s a compromise
5-7-5 syllables
In poet’s language
Someone please help me revive my clubs
At 2/12/24 01:16 AM, Thetageist wrote:At 2/12/24 12:56 AM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 11:45 PM, ChronoNomad wrote:At 2/11/24 08:13 PM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 02:47 PM, Gribbus07 wrote:At 2/11/24 02:32 PM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 11:59 AM, Gribbus07 wrote:I wake up
I take a shit
I get out of bed
That's not a haiku
They need five, seven, and five
syllables to count
ok I get it
I wont make something stupid
like that ever again
That's alright, I've made
that mistake before, even
in an image too
What's really funny
Is that most of what we write
Here is not haiku.
It's a cynical,
Humorous poem about
Life called senryū.
@Gribbus07
...But seriously,
Do you pull an Amber Heard
In your own bed? Gross!
A true haiku can
only be properly done
in Japan's language
There’s a compromise
5-7-5 syllables
In poet’s language
What I meant was a
haiku done in English
loses its beauty
I'm just one of those people still on the path of getting themselves out there in the world. If you're confused by my mug below you haven't read my profile. I point you to it.
At 2/12/24 03:38 AM, art-dude wrote:At 2/12/24 01:16 AM, Thetageist wrote:At 2/12/24 12:56 AM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 11:45 PM, ChronoNomad wrote:At 2/11/24 08:13 PM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 02:47 PM, Gribbus07 wrote:At 2/11/24 02:32 PM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 11:59 AM, Gribbus07 wrote:I wake up
I take a shit
I get out of bed
That's not a haiku
They need five, seven, and five
syllables to count
ok I get it
I wont make something stupid
like that ever again
That's alright, I've made
that mistake before, even
in an image too
What's really funny
Is that most of what we write
Here is not haiku.
It's a cynical,
Humorous poem about
Life called senryū.
@Gribbus07
...But seriously,
Do you pull an Amber Heard
In your own bed? Gross!
A true haiku can
only be properly done
in Japan's language
There’s a compromise
5-7-5 syllables
In poet’s language
What I meant was a
haiku done in English
loses its beauty
Now wait a minute.
Then what’s the point of this thread?
Only for shitposts?
(Or do you mean translated?)
Someone please help me revive my clubs
At 2/12/24 07:04 AM, Thetageist wrote:At 2/12/24 03:38 AM, art-dude wrote:At 2/12/24 01:16 AM, Thetageist wrote:At 2/12/24 12:56 AM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 11:45 PM, ChronoNomad wrote:At 2/11/24 08:13 PM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 02:47 PM, Gribbus07 wrote:At 2/11/24 02:32 PM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 11:59 AM, Gribbus07 wrote:I wake up
I take a shit
I get out of bed
That's not a haiku
They need five, seven, and five
syllables to count
ok I get it
I wont make something stupid
like that ever again
That's alright, I've made
that mistake before, even
in an image too
What's really funny
Is that most of what we write
Here is not haiku.
It's a cynical,
Humorous poem about
Life called senryū.
@Gribbus07
...But seriously,
Do you pull an Amber Heard
In your own bed? Gross!
A true haiku can
only be properly done
in Japan's language
There’s a compromise
5-7-5 syllables
In poet’s language
What I meant was a
haiku done in English
loses its beauty
Now wait a minute.
Then what’s the point of this thread?
Only for shitposts?
(Or do you mean translated?)
The form is nothing.
If the soul is preserved,
The poetry blossoms
"Please don't tap on the glass. Penguins can see and hear you alright. They just don't care."
At 2/12/24 07:14 AM, Remi-le-Oduen wrote:At 2/12/24 07:04 AM, Thetageist wrote:At 2/12/24 03:38 AM, art-dude wrote:At 2/12/24 01:16 AM, Thetageist wrote:At 2/12/24 12:56 AM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 11:45 PM, ChronoNomad wrote:At 2/11/24 08:13 PM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 02:47 PM, Gribbus07 wrote:At 2/11/24 02:32 PM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 11:59 AM, Gribbus07 wrote:I wake up
I take a shit
I get out of bed
That's not a haiku
They need five, seven, and five
syllables to count
ok I get it
I wont make something stupid
like that ever again
That's alright, I've made
that mistake before, even
in an image too
What's really funny
Is that most of what we write
Here is not haiku.
It's a cynical,
Humorous poem about
Life called senryū.
@Gribbus07
...But seriously,
Do you pull an Amber Heard
In your own bed? Gross!
A true haiku can
only be properly done
in Japan's language
There’s a compromise
5-7-5 syllables
In poet’s language
What I meant was a
haiku done in English
loses its beauty
Now wait a minute.
Then what’s the point of this thread?
Only for shitposts?
(Or do you mean translated?)
The form is nothing.
If the soul is preserved,
The poetry blossoms
Look at all those quotes.
Nested Haikus in Haikus.
Haiku Inception.
At 2/12/24 11:32 AM, AceMantra wrote:At 2/12/24 07:14 AM, Remi-le-Oduen wrote:At 2/12/24 07:04 AM, Thetageist wrote:At 2/12/24 03:38 AM, art-dude wrote:At 2/12/24 01:16 AM, Thetageist wrote:At 2/12/24 12:56 AM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 11:45 PM, ChronoNomad wrote:At 2/11/24 08:13 PM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 02:47 PM, Gribbus07 wrote:At 2/11/24 02:32 PM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 11:59 AM, Gribbus07 wrote:I wake up
I take a shit
I get out of bed
That's not a haiku
They need five, seven, and five
syllables to count
ok I get it
I wont make something stupid
like that ever again
That's alright, I've made
that mistake before, even
in an image too
What's really funny
Is that most of what we write
Here is not haiku.
It's a cynical,
Humorous poem about
Life called senryū.
@Gribbus07
...But seriously,
Do you pull an Amber Heard
In your own bed? Gross!
A true haiku can
only be properly done
in Japan's language
There’s a compromise
5-7-5 syllables
In poet’s language
What I meant was a
haiku done in English
loses its beauty
Now wait a minute.
Then what’s the point of this thread?
Only for shitposts?
(Or do you mean translated?)
The form is nothing.
If the soul is preserved,
The poetry blossoms
Look at all those quotes.
Nested Haikus in Haikus.
Haiku Inception.
A faint reek of manure
Above the flowerbed.
Yet here I am, admiring.
(Just in case it's too vague - the beginning of this quotes was a haiku about shitposts)
"Please don't tap on the glass. Penguins can see and hear you alright. They just don't care."
At 2/12/24 12:34 PM, Remi-le-Oduen wrote:At 2/12/24 11:32 AM, AceMantra wrote:At 2/12/24 07:14 AM, Remi-le-Oduen wrote:At 2/12/24 07:04 AM, Thetageist wrote:At 2/12/24 03:38 AM, art-dude wrote:At 2/12/24 01:16 AM, Thetageist wrote:At 2/12/24 12:56 AM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 11:45 PM, ChronoNomad wrote:At 2/11/24 08:13 PM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 02:47 PM, Gribbus07 wrote:At 2/11/24 02:32 PM, art-dude wrote:At 2/11/24 11:59 AM, Gribbus07 wrote:I wake up
I take a shit
I get out of bed
That's not a haiku
They need five, seven, and five
syllables to count
ok I get it
I wont make something stupid
like that ever again
That's alright, I've made
that mistake before, even
in an image too
What's really funny
Is that most of what we write
Here is not haiku.
It's a cynical,
Humorous poem about
Life called senryū.
@Gribbus07
...But seriously,
Do you pull an Amber Heard
In your own bed? Gross!
A true haiku can
only be properly done
in Japan's language
There’s a compromise
5-7-5 syllables
In poet’s language
What I meant was a
haiku done in English
loses its beauty
Now wait a minute.
Then what’s the point of this thread?
Only for shitposts?
(Or do you mean translated?)
The form is nothing.
If the soul is preserved,
The poetry blossoms
Look at all those quotes.
Nested Haikus in Haikus.
Haiku Inception.
A faint reek of manure
Above the flowerbed.
Yet here I am, admiring.
(Just in case it's too vague - the beginning of this quotes was a haiku about shitposts)
To the person four
replies above this one, yes,
that is what I meant.
I'm just one of those people still on the path of getting themselves out there in the world. If you're confused by my mug below you haven't read my profile. I point you to it.
A bouquet of raw
Sewage; nostrils filling with
Pestilent ordure.
Rotting and fetid,
It seeps into the landscape,
Clogging earth and sea.
The sky seems fine, but
Pollutants reign supreme; the
Acid rain, falling...
"It's just fine," we say.
"Everything is fine," we say.
Until it isn't.
*sips tea*
Seventy-five days.
No job. The knife sinks deeper
into self-doubt's wound.
"Time's fun when you're having flies." ~Kermit the Frog
At 2/13/24 10:07 PM, TaintedLogic wrote:Seventy-five days.
No job. The knife sinks deeper
into self-doubt's wound.
I believe in you
Partly skill, partly dumb luck;
Wish you all the best.
Someone please help me revive my clubs
Currently concerned
about a long-distance friend
who I can't check on
I'm just one of those people still on the path of getting themselves out there in the world. If you're confused by my mug below you haven't read my profile. I point you to it.
Unexpectancy:
The condition of being
Unexpectant (verb).
Anatomical
Hearts are surprisingly bad
Gifts for Valentine's.
They also don't hold
As much candy as heart-shaped
Boxes. Go figure.
What is a human?
In the hearts of humankind,
Humanity dies.
Someone please help me revive my clubs
Sometimes I feel like
I'm trying to catch time with
A butterfly net.
At 2/23/24 03:35 AM, RepriseAgain wrote:Sometimes I feel like
I'm trying to catch time with
A butterfly net.
Okay, I thought maybe we can try some renga here. My 2 lines will be
And the cold wind brings nothing
But the snowflakes in my face.
Renga is made by multiple people. First one makes 3 lines, next one - 2 lines, then next one 3 lines again. Each 5 lines are supposed to complete themselves into one poem (tanka). This way renga is a chain of tanka where each part has a standalone, complete ideas and also forms a bridge to the part before it and the one after it. I wonder if anyone is interested in this kind of game. So, if you feel like into it, you are supposed to make next 3 lines that resonates with my 2. I will wright everything from the beginning to make it easier
At 2/23/24 03:35 AM, RepriseAgain wrote:
Sometimes I feel like
I'm trying to catch time with
A butterfly net.
And the cold wind brings nothing
But the snowflakes in my face.
"Please don't tap on the glass. Penguins can see and hear you alright. They just don't care."
At 2/23/24 03:35 AM, RepriseAgain wrote:
Sometimes I feel like
I'm trying to catch time with
A butterfly net.At 2/23/24 07:03 AM, Remi-le-Oduen wrote:
And the cold wind brings nothing
But the snowflakes in my face.
A stark reminder
Of paths not taken; a life
That will never be.
*sips tea*
At 2/23/24 10:32 PM, ChronoNomad wrote:At 2/23/24 03:35 AM, RepriseAgain wrote:
Sometimes I feel like
I'm trying to catch time with
A butterfly net.At 2/23/24 07:03 AM, Remi-le-Oduen wrote:
And the cold wind brings nothing
But the snowflakes in my face.
A stark reminder
Of paths not taken; a life
That will never be.
*sips tea*
A woman photo in the feed
She used to smile ike that to me.
"Please don't tap on the glass. Penguins can see and hear you alright. They just don't care."
At 2/24/24 12:03 AM, Remi-le-Oduen wrote:At 2/23/24 10:32 PM, ChronoNomad wrote:At 2/23/24 03:35 AM, RepriseAgain wrote:
Sometimes I feel like
I'm trying to catch time with
A butterfly net.At 2/23/24 07:03 AM, Remi-le-Oduen wrote:
And the cold wind brings nothing
But the snowflakes in my face.
A stark reminder
Of paths not taken; a life
That will never be.
*sips tea*
A woman photo in the feed
She used to smile ike that to me.
I pace, all alone,
Wondering if I will find
That feeling again.
Someone please help me revive my clubs
Unrelated to the long poem that’s going on:
I hear your voice, clear!
Your dystopian fiction
Is my reflection.
Someone please help me revive my clubs
At 1/9/24 10:55 PM, Thetageist wrote:At 1/9/24 09:29 PM, TaintedLogic wrote:At 1/9/24 07:46 PM, Thetageist wrote:I have nothing elseAnd thus, it must be
But the thing that’s killing me
For some fleeting joy
(Disclaimer: Not about substance abuse or anything else physically dangerous.)
about a League of Legends
infatuation.
I know a guy who
Started playing League last year
I hope he’s okay
Important update:
Once he started, quickly stopped.
Zero damage done!
Someone please help me revive my clubs
The wind is stirring
Emotions inside of me
And I need to piss
