And the last of The HotShots is Baha, the Tank he's got a chainsaw and he uses it.
Well here are members of the other robot team that exists within the same story of the hotshots; This is Captain, Leader of The Killing Machines.
Another member of the Killing Machines Mauler is the tank type similar to Baha but is larger and stronger with big hands.
Well fishing this thread out of the seas of indifference (once again) with the latest of my ever expanding Wasteland characters. Meet MadJack, Twin Barrels of Madness, Tire-iron of.... something or another, and Sweet Goggles, Its unfinished (like most of my work) But this one I will finish for sure.... or at least halfway.
P.S. Splatter marks are hard to draw.
I'm sure you didn't just post these to get compliments. (: So let the critiques begin!
First off, I know this is a cartoon, but there are things I can point out that could use a little fixing up. I'm going to point out your last one ( I think it's the last one) The soldier you posted- VERY sketchy. Though cross hatching is a technique, try to shade lightly and might I suggest never using pen? Though I hear often "I can't draw very well unless it's in pen" That's... Bullocks. Try using a pencil because we ALL make mistakes. Then you can outline. Because you're pictures again, are VERY sketchy. I can't really touch the anatomy since it IS a cartoon, but just a few little pointers on it anyways...
On some of them the arm length actually works well, on your soldier those arms are SHORT. You should actually look at your own body to draw even if it's a cartoon, just to get a feel for anatomy even if it's loose.
And the hands I get what you're going for, but in some of them you get VERY sloppy and just make a jumble. ALWAYS TAKE YOUR TIME. I know you're trying to make a shit ton of these. But if you ever feel like rushing past a point, just take a break or stop for the day till you feel like finishing it.
If you have any questions, you can always PM me. I never mind helping. I hope you don't feel like I'm tearing you apart. There is always room for improvement in EVERYONES art. And I hope you improve too!
Check out my Art.
At 3/21/10 10:04 AM, JackDGreatest wrote: Well fishing this thread out of the seas of indifference (once again) with the latest of my ever expanding Wasteland characters. Meet MadJack, Twin Barrels of Madness, Tire-iron of.... something or another, and Sweet Goggles, Its unfinished (like most of my work) But this one I will finish for sure.... or at least halfway.
P.S. Splatter marks are hard to draw.
You're anatomy is a LOT better on this one. and the the fact that his head is completely different than all the others is a huge plus for me. I love that it's tiny and you can tell it's a different person than all the others. Though I still stand by the same advice given. (:
Check out my Art.
Don't worry I appreciate criticism
Just have one question about the first comment, Which are you talking about when you say soldier?
Oh and I do use pencil, on all of them its just not noticeable cause mostly on the Meat-Heads I used Shitty Papermate 50 pens for five bucks pens so They were low quality I've since moved on to micron, though I haven't drawn a lot recently.
At 3/21/10 11:58 AM, JackDGreatest wrote: Don't worry I appreciate criticism
Just have one question about the first comment, Which are you talking about when you say soldier?
Oh and I do use pencil, on all of them its just not noticeable cause mostly on the Meat-Heads I used Shitty Papermate 50 pens for five bucks pens so They were low quality I've since moved on to micron, though I haven't drawn a lot recently.
Sorry. I didn't even notice the 5 pages. I just saw the first page. Fucking rules. D:< New pictures should have new posts. Anyways.... Like a said before, even though these are cartoons, you should still look at how anatomy looks. And also- clothes wrinkles. WOAH. That will make SUCH a difference! Base your wrinkles off of something. Put on some baggy pants take a photo and use that as reference. And like I said before, it's very sketchy. You should work on that. (: it takes a while to get past, but try! Don't give in because it's 'too hard' or it's not what you're used to. If you move out of the box, improvement is inevitable. Trust me, when I started out of the box I SUCKED. But I still kept working at it even though I was uncomfortable with it and it looked like shit. And one day it just clicked. You can do it!
Check out my Art.
Yeah JQB has pointed the folds issue out to me, I'm working on it but I haven't been drawing too much lately so progress is slow.
Well here's progress on MadJacK of The Wasteland Series.
HAHA!!!! Proof that I can make Nice Clean Art more to myself than you guys, This is for my Brother's Senior class president Election, He has a Mohawk so that explains the Zebra's Mohawk.
So I am in a drafting and engineering class at school and acquired Solidworks for free.. mostly my teacher has been making us do little things but we had a big playground project and I'd like to share it with you guys now my first attempt to color and it was hastily done but now I'm just making excuses.
Well now that spring break has started I finally have some free time to do whatever, I've decided to make a car in Solidworks. Not just any car though, The WasteLander: here's my sketch page of itwhere I just scribbled out ideas:
Been A while not that I was particularly yearned for but here's some More wastelanders, Theses are two of Bubs and Gerald's relatives, The MADMEN we have MortalBug & Trencher.
This is MortalBug.
This is the Commander of New BlackStar, basically the bad guys in Wastelanders.
At 4/28/10 09:19 PM, JackDGreatest wrote: This is the Commander of New BlackStar, basically the bad guys in Wastelanders.
Damn pic didn't show up.
And His Second in command:
GENERAL DEATHFACE!
At 4/28/10 09:26 PM, JackDGreatest wrote: And Colonel MURDER!!!!
See a theme anyone?
Forgetting to post the pics is it I guess.
Last Post of the Day:
Mike's Oracle armor, made by The old BlackStar.
At 4/28/10 10:05 PM, JackDGreatest wrote: Last Post of the Day:
Mike's Oracle armor, made by The old BlackStar.
Updated Oracle Armor.
At 7/3/10 11:30 PM, JackDGreatest wrote:At 4/28/10 10:05 PM, JackDGreatest wrote: Last Post of the Day:Updated Oracle Armor.
Mike's Oracle armor, made by The old BlackStar.
You sure are improving Jack, but I think now is about the time you step away from those lines and start using more shading.
NEVER LOOSE FAITH IN MANCUNT
I'll try it out, expect something from me where I try to use shading instead of lines by the end of the week.
So, earlier today I sit down to start drawing, with shading in mind, I pull out a copy of one of my other previously drawn picture I sit for about a minute staring at the paper and then I realize that I've got no clue what the hell I'm doing, so if any of you want to help me out that would be accepted.
that flash should help, most of its knowing where light hits, where shadows are cast, basically still anatomy practice
So I've got like 100 dollars that I've come into, and I'm considering getting a tablet and I would want to know if this a good one
At 7/11/10 01:55 AM, JackDGreatest wrote: So I've got like 100 dollars that I've come into, and I'm considering getting a tablet and I would want to know if this a good one
Wacom is just your best bet for a tablet; I have only ever had one tablet (wacom bamboo (older version)) but its been going along for 3 years now (one of which being used extensively) and has survived uncountable cups of coffee spilled over it.
What Ive heard from other poeple is that wacom is just sturdier than most other brands; and the few extra dollars are not just for the name.
NEVER LOOSE FAITH IN MANCUNT
