i would love some feedback on my electronic music please ;]
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Happy Hardcore
Some old DNB
And something even older that kicks a lot of ass that I never requested :]
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/reviews/
362159
Hey club, it's been a long time---a really long time haha. Now that I'm not busy with school anymore, I'm now back to NG and serious music production. I have a couple songs that I released during the school year that I would like to have reviewed. Thank you!
Here's that update. I took a little while and as a result I'm pretty tired and I'm fairly sure I left something out or did a mistake, but ANYWAY.
A pretty solid week. I had to dish out a few asterisks but YumeSin and SCTE3 did all of the requests, and a few other members helped by doing one, two or three reviews. The maximum amount of RRC reviews per request was four.
SCTE3 is also getting even closer to beating me to the 3,000 points milestone (and I should seriously get off my lazy ass and do something about it) and we're getting closer to 7,000 reviews all time.
And that's about it for this week. Again, sorry if I made any mistakes, and good luck for the next audio-filled week. Enjoy.
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Member's Update #83
[#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]
01 ) 7546 | 1176 / 2121 | 055.45% || 000 | 00 / 17 | 000.00% | Coop *
02 ) 7326 | 1138 / 2125 | 053.55% || 021 | 03 / 17 | 017.65% | Haggard
03 ) 2927 | 0440 / 2000 | 022.00% || 003 | 00 / 16 | 000.00% | Supersteph54
04 ) 2768 | 0427 / 0476 | 089.71% || 112 | 17 / 17 | 100.00% | SCTE3
05 ) 0229 | 0034 / 0034 | 100.00% || 111 | 17 / 17 | 100.00% | YumeSin
06 ) 0177 | 0025 / 0145 | 017.24% || 015 | 02 / 17 | 011.76% | sixflab
07 ) 0115 | 0018 / 0033 | 054.55% || 006 | 01 / 17 | 005.88% | Omega-Ravager
08 ) 0070 | 0010 / 0057 | 017.54% || 000 | 00 / 17 | 000.00% | head2toewinner ***
09 ) 0066 | 0010 / 0055 | 018.18% || 006 | 01 / 17 | 005.88% | aliaspharow
11 ) 0059 | 0009 / 0047 | 019.15% || 020 | 03 / 17 | 017.65% | joeyjoah
12 ) 0029 | 0005 / 0044 | 011.36% || 000 | 00 / 17 | 000.00% | saramary3 **
14 ) 0015 | 0002 / 0057 | 003.51% || 000 | 00 / 17 | 000.00% | Tokecat *
The stars indicate for how long the user has been inactive in this club. "Inactive" means, that user hasn't gained any points by reviewing OR by posting.
*: User has been inactive last week
**: User has been inactive for the last two weeks
***: User has been inactive for the last three weeks
If you are inactive for more than three weeks AND if your completion rate falls below 20%, OR if you are inactive for more than four weeks, you are excluded from the list. You may rejoin this club, but your points will be lost.
Statistics:
*Requests This Week: 17
Total Requests All Time: 2140
Reviews Made This Week: 44
Total Reviews All Time: 6841
Average Per Member: 3.14
Average Per Request: 2.58
Sigs Forgotten: 2
*New to the List: None
Leaving the List: ToastedToastyToast and doppler73
*All Requests Completed:
SCTE3 and YumeSin
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NOTE - READ THESE RULES, EVEN IF YOU HAVE ALREADY READ THE RULES IN THE FIRST POST. THEY ARE AN UPDATED VERSION OF THE RULES IN THE FIRST POST AND THEY HAVE NEW IMPORTANT RULES!
Hello! Welcome to the new Review Request Club thread. This thread is meant to give the club a fresh start and make it a pleasant place to stay. In order to do this, it goes without saying that you must follow the regular BBS rules and read the C&C Advice Thread before posting if you are new to this forum.
This club aims to increase the exposure of the most under-rated Newgrounds music, art and flash artists. The other major purpose of the club is to offer the Newgrounds artists high quality feedback so they can constantly improve their work.
To the requesters:
Every Newgrounds user is allowed to request a review as soon as he submitted something. To get your work reviewed, don't post here without thinking but follow these few rules:
- Post a direct link to the submission(s) you want reviewed.
- Make no more than 3 Flash and Art requests between two updates (that's one week), and no more than 3 Audio Requests between 5 updates (that's four weeks).
- Please respond to reviews, reviewers like it and some of them are statwho... oh wait, interested in stats.
- Be patient. Due to the points system, you may not see reviews until up to two weeks after you requested, or if you requested more than 1 Audio submission, you may not see reviews on your second submission up until 3 weeks after you requested, and you may not see reviews on your third submission up until 4 weeks after you requested.
- Do NOT request without posting a link, be kind, reviewers are not robots.
- Do NOT simply say "Review everything" or just link to your profile.
- Do NOT request reviews for the same submission more than once.
- Do NOT request reviews for a submission with over 50 reviews.
- Do NOT request reviews for spam. Spam is only there to annoy, not to be critically analyzed.
- Unless you are a club member, only request reviews for YOUR OWN submissions.
To the reviewers:
If you want to join the club and complete requests, simply post in the thread saying you would like to join. Then, regular members will go through your reviews and determine if they are good enough to be part of the club. Your reviews are required to be helpful, developed and well-organised. If you need help with writing good reviews, read Fro's guide to writing helpful reviews.
Once you are accepted, you can start reviewing stuff. If you are a new member of the club, once you understand how the point system works, please post - one or two days before the update - the total points you've earned during the week. This is considered as a sort of application form, and if you fail to do so, you will NOT be added to the club.
Points System:
List updaters will keep track of each member's points in order to build a list. You don't need to post your points before each update but you can keep track of your score on your own so any error can be fixed. This is how points are counted:
5 points for a review on a requested submission (movie, game, art, or audio).
1 point for writing "Review Request Club" at the bottom of a requested review.
3 points for posting at least once throughout the two weeks.
5 points for referring a new member (must mention you in first post).
7 points for reviewing all requests/recommendations between two updates.
Club Updates:
Each Sunday or Monday, a list of all the members is created, counting up their points, featuring various stats and posting a list of requested submissions. Assuming you review the submissions in that list, you will get points for them accordingly in the following members' update, around a week later.
Don't forget the lists are built and updated by humans so it may be possible the update is delayed due to various real life reasons. If it ever occurs, don't get mad; calm down and wait :).
Frequently Asked Questions:
Should we have an FAQ?
I don't know. It kinda seems like overkill.
Why a new thread?
The main idea was to give the club a new and fresh start. Since the old one was flooded by requests and not updated any more, the RRC regulars thought creating a new thread would be best for the club.
Should I link to the club in my forum signature?
There's no obligation to do so, but it's certainly appreciated. Remember that you can put a high number in place of the page number in the URL and if that page doesn't exist yet, Newgrounds will take you to the latest page, whatever it is. For example, "http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/107 2042/999" will take you to the latest page of this club.
RRC Signature?
Yes, at the end of each review, if you want you can write down 'Review Request Club'. There is no obligation to do so, but you'll get +1 point if you put the RRC signature in your review. You can add anything you want to it, E.G.: *Review Request Club*, |Review Request Club|, -Review Request Club-, etc, but as long as 'Review Request Club' is clearly written, you will get the point. You are also allowed to add the sig in any reviews other than requests in this club, as long as you are a club member yourself. It's all the more exposure for the club, and it's very much appreciated.
+1 point if I put the RRC signature in my review... I'm not sure if I get it correctly.
You gain 6 points for a review on a request with "Review Request Club" in the end of it, as opposed to 5 points if you hadn't added the signature at the end. If it's still not clear, read this.
Does the Review Request Club review for non-NG stuff?
No. It must be an NG submission. If you have a non-NG submission which you would like us to review, then use your common sense and upload it to NG. Also, we will only review using the 'Write a Review' method on submissions. We won't send reviews by PM, review in your newspost or review in any particular thread of yours.
Do I have to review all the requests?
No you don't have to, just do your best :). Though completing them all will give you 7 extra points.
Which requests should I review?
If you want to get points for the next member's update, look for the latest requests list in the club thread and review the requests from that list. If you review any requests from various posts in the thread which would have been posted after the latest requests list, you will be getting points for the member's update after the next one.
can u review allz mah flashz guise? kthxbai.
No.
If you have more questions, feel free to post about it in the thread or PM a member and if your question is frequently asked, it'll be added to the FAQ.
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That's all about the club, though this new version of the club couldn't be opened without mentioning the old thread regulars who have made it a great place to spend time. Kudos to Freelance-Magician for creating the original club and to FattyWhale for maintaining it for so long. Thanks also to Sonofkirk for starting this new thread and doing many updates.
Have fun!
Useful links: RRC - The point system, clarified, Fro's Guide to Writing Helpful Reviews, Fro's Guide to Writing Good Reviews
Resources: Old Review Request Club thread, Club info, Google.
Review Request Club | CHECK THIS OUT | Formerly Supersteph54 | I'm an Audio Moderator. PM me for Audio Portal help.
At 5/16/11 07:46 PM, Supersteph54 wrote: Member's Update #83
Thanks for the update!
[#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]
01 ) 7546 | 1176 / 2121 | 055.45% || 000 | 00 / 17 | 000.00% | Coop *
02 ) 7326 | 1138 / 2125 | 053.55% || 021 | 03 / 17 | 017.65% | Haggard
3 reviews this time. I will try to beat this amount the next week, by writing at least 4 reviews. XD
Surf Nazis must die! || Wi/Ht? #38
Hey! I haven't posted anything in forever, but I just dabbled into some dubstep, and was wondering what some people thought. I'd love if you could listen and review this piece. If you could vote, that would be much appreciated, but I'm more interested in the review :)
At 5/16/11 07:46 PM, Supersteph54 wrote: 06 ) 0177 | 0025 / 0145 | 017.24% || 015 | 02 / 17 | 011.76% | sixflab
Glad I didn't go another week without doing a review from the club. My pace is still as slow as ever though. I need to stop with the constant procrastination and start just doing one review a day at least.
Thanks in advance.
Word to your mothers
I've been trying my best to help ever since I saw your post in General, toast. I got bored and decided to check out the clock crew website, and I found that PatriotClock has a 6-page post about you, and it seems that there are some other things that happened after the review. Although whatever you said doesn't even matter when compared to the blatant harassment that you've received.
q
I'd be great if someone could review this, just finished it like 20 mins ago if that, thanks!
Just Chill
At 5/20/11 03:36 PM, ToastedToastyToast wrote: Im going to turn to you guys for some real help here.
Well i'm going to agree that you are getting a bit of unfair treatment from the CC and even have a flash in the portal for you i've seen groups of users do far worse. They may be getting on your nerves now but things will calm down in due time. Just take it as a lesson learned and try not to tread on murky water in the future.
22x5 = 111
22x1 = 22
111 + 22 = 133+3(post) =136
Ah, such a busy week this one has been.
Even busier next week for my birthday(woohoo) and my family is coming down here to celebrate it.
Might not finish all of them next week, but I will try my best : D
Photo(sketch) from a DA artist. Background from an old pub in Europe. Magic done in photoshop.
Utada avatar done by me and a sexy looking stock.
I want to request you guys to review this:
-
Unpublished Submission
It is a work of mine
Ecchi first, ask questions never.
Animator/Artist for hire.
Hey, so I submitted a new dubstep tune, and I was wondering what you kind fellows think of it. I eagerly await response :3
Thanks in advance y0.
Hey since you may be reviewing my other song from two days ago why not just review this one too, if you have time that is. Thanks!
Just Chill
At 5/22/11 09:02 PM, SCTE3 wrote:At 5/22/11 07:28 PM, Addict wrote: Hello everyone, I was wondering if I could join this fine club.You can review stuff from page 177. Also seeing you really have no reviews, feel free to look at the reviews of any member here as sample reviews. :P Welcome.
I never really wrote any reviews, on separate accounts I did. I'm looking for a fresh start of habits around here and writing some reviews would be excellent. I have good spelling, good grammar, and my vocabulary expands all the time. I'd like to review any kind of submission, since it's all fun in general...
If I can join though, that'd be excellent.
I'm in agreement. It's usually a standard to see some reviews from a user first but I think we can let it slide. You show prowess on the forums so I don't have any doubts that you would do a fine job reviewing here and there. Best of luck.
At 5/22/11 07:10 PM, SCTE3 wrote: Will likely end up posting list late tomorrow or Tuesday since I am going to get everything done finished up on the list either very late tonight or tomorrow.
Alright in that case I'll update tomorrow. Better for me anyway because today I've got a bunch of audio-modding to do and my French GCSE too today.
Review Request Club | CHECK THIS OUT | Formerly Supersteph54 | I'm an Audio Moderator. PM me for Audio Portal help.
Please review this:
Wrong link before.
Animator/Artist for hire.
Here's the update. Had time to do it so early because I have no more exams. I feel so alive, yippee :3.
Another solid week, although I'll have to say that we were saved by SCTE3 and YumeSin. They both reviewed every request, so good job to them. Good job to Coop, Haggard and aliaspharow too for helping out. Stats are alright - by coincidence the Average per Member and Average per Request are both the same xP. Milestones-wise, SCTE3 is getting closer to 3,000 total points and dangerously close to beating me to it (but I don't think I'll let that happen). We're also getting closer and closer to 7,000 total reviews.
That said, quite a few members were inactive and we also lost two members, head2toewinner and saramary3. Bye guys :C.
That's about it. Enjoy the update.
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Member's Update #84
[#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]
01 ) 7552 | 1177 / 2135 | 055.13% || 006 | 01 / 14 | 007.14% | Coop
02 ) 7353 | 1142 / 2139 | 053.39% || 027 | 04 / 14 | 028.57% | Haggard
03 ) 2930 | 0440 / 2014 | 021.85% || 003 | 00 / 14 | 000.00% | Supersteph54
04 ) 2862 | 0441 / 0490 | 090.00% || 094 | 14 / 14 | 100.00% | SCTE3
05 ) 0323 | 0048 / 0048 | 100.00% || 094 | 14 / 14 | 100.00% | YumeSin
06 ) 0180 | 0025 / 0159 | 015.72% || 003 | 00 / 14 | 000.00% | sixflab *
07 ) 0115 | 0018 / 0047 | 038.30% || 000 | 00 / 14 | 000.00% | Omega-Ravager *
09 ) 0078 | 0012 / 0069 | 017.39% || 012 | 02 / 14 | 014.29% | aliaspharow
11 ) 0059 | 0009 / 0061 | 014.75% || 000 | 00 / 14 | 000.00% | joeyjoah *
14 ) 0015 | 0002 / 0071 | 002.82% || 000 | 00 / 14 | 000.00% | Tokecat **
The stars indicate for how long the user has been inactive in this club. "Inactive" means, that user hasn't gained any points by reviewing OR by posting.
*: User has been inactive last week
**: User has been inactive for the last two weeks
***: User has been inactive for the last three weeks
If you are inactive for more than three weeks AND if your completion rate falls below 20%, OR if you are inactive for more than four weeks, you are excluded from the list. You may rejoin this club, but your points will be lost.
Statistics:
*Requests This Week: 14
Total Requests All Time: 2154
Reviews Made This Week: 35
Total Reviews All Time: 6876
Average Per Member: 2.5
Average Per Request: 2.5
Sigs Forgotten: 0
*New to the List: None.
Leaving the List: saramary3 and head2toewinner
*All Requests Completed:
SCTE3 and YumeSin
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Review Request Club | CHECK THIS OUT | Formerly Supersteph54 | I'm an Audio Moderator. PM me for Audio Portal help.
At 5/23/11 10:40 PM, SCTE3 wrote: 136 points for week, 100% done, 1 missed sig, sorry for finishing the list so late.
Also forgot to say - firstly no problem if you finished late :P.
Also I couldn't find the review you missed that sig in, hence the 0 next to 'Sigs Forgotten'.
Review Request Club | CHECK THIS OUT | Formerly Supersteph54 | I'm an Audio Moderator. PM me for Audio Portal help.
And it's probably a good idea to post the club info now too...
NOTE - READ THESE RULES, EVEN IF YOU HAVE ALREADY READ THE RULES IN THE FIRST POST. THEY ARE AN UPDATED VERSION OF THE RULES IN THE FIRST POST AND THEY HAVE NEW IMPORTANT RULES!
Hello! Welcome to the new Review Request Club thread. This thread is meant to give the club a fresh start and make it a pleasant place to stay. In order to do this, it goes without saying that you must follow the regular BBS rules and read the C&C Advice Thread before posting if you are new to this forum.
This club aims to increase the exposure of the most under-rated Newgrounds music, art and flash artists. The other major purpose of the club is to offer the Newgrounds artists high quality feedback so they can constantly improve their work.
To the requesters:
Every Newgrounds user is allowed to request a review as soon as he submitted something. To get your work reviewed, don't post here without thinking but follow these few rules:
- Post a direct link to the submission(s) you want reviewed.
- Make no more than 3 Flash and Art requests between two updates (that's one week), and no more than 3 Audio Requests between 5 updates (that's four weeks).
- Please respond to reviews, reviewers like it and some of them are statwho... oh wait, interested in stats.
- Be patient. Due to the points system, you may not see reviews until up to two weeks after you requested, or if you requested more than 1 Audio submission, you may not see reviews on your second submission up until 3 weeks after you requested, and you may not see reviews on your third submission up until 4 weeks after you requested.
- Do NOT request without posting a link, be kind, reviewers are not robots.
- Do NOT simply say "Review everything" or just link to your profile.
- Do NOT request reviews for the same submission more than once.
- Do NOT request reviews for a submission with over 50 reviews.
- Do NOT request reviews for spam. Spam is only there to annoy, not to be critically analyzed.
- Unless you are a club member, only request reviews for YOUR OWN submissions.
To the reviewers:
If you want to join the club and complete requests, simply post in the thread saying you would like to join. Then, regular members will go through your reviews and determine if they are good enough to be part of the club. Your reviews are required to be helpful, developed and well-organised. If you need help with writing good reviews, read Fro's guide to writing helpful reviews.
Once you are accepted, you can start reviewing stuff. If you are a new member of the club, once you understand how the point system works, please post - one or two days before the update - the total points you've earned during the week. This is considered as a sort of application form, and if you fail to do so, you will NOT be added to the club.
Points System:
List updaters will keep track of each member's points in order to build a list. You don't need to post your points before each update but you can keep track of your score on your own so any error can be fixed. This is how points are counted:
5 points for a review on a requested submission (movie, game, art, or audio).
1 point for writing "Review Request Club" at the bottom of a requested review.
3 points for posting at least once throughout the two weeks.
5 points for referring a new member (must mention you in first post).
7 points for reviewing all requests/recommendations between two updates.
Club Updates:
Each Sunday or Monday, a list of all the members is created, counting up their points, featuring various stats and posting a list of requested submissions. Assuming you review the submissions in that list, you will get points for them accordingly in the following members' update, around a week later.
Don't forget the lists are built and updated by humans so it may be possible the update is delayed due to various real life reasons. If it ever occurs, don't get mad; calm down and wait :).
Frequently Asked Questions:
Should we have an FAQ?
I don't know. It kinda seems like overkill.
Why a new thread?
The main idea was to give the club a new and fresh start. Since the old one was flooded by requests and not updated any more, the RRC regulars thought creating a new thread would be best for the club.
Should I link to the club in my forum signature?
There's no obligation to do so, but it's certainly appreciated. Remember that you can put a high number in place of the page number in the URL and if that page doesn't exist yet, Newgrounds will take you to the latest page, whatever it is. For example, "http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/107 2042/999" will take you to the latest page of this club.
RRC Signature?
Yes, at the end of each review, if you want you can write down 'Review Request Club'. There is no obligation to do so, but you'll get +1 point if you put the RRC signature in your review. You can add anything you want to it, E.G.: *Review Request Club*, |Review Request Club|, -Review Request Club-, etc, but as long as 'Review Request Club' is clearly written, you will get the point. You are also allowed to add the sig in any reviews other than requests in this club, as long as you are a club member yourself. It's all the more exposure for the club, and it's very much appreciated.
+1 point if I put the RRC signature in my review... I'm not sure if I get it correctly.
You gain 6 points for a review on a request with "Review Request Club" in the end of it, as opposed to 5 points if you hadn't added the signature at the end. If it's still not clear, read this.
Does the Review Request Club review for non-NG stuff?
No. It must be an NG submission. If you have a non-NG submission which you would like us to review, then use your common sense and upload it to NG. Also, we will only review using the 'Write a Review' method on submissions. We won't send reviews by PM, review in your newspost or review in any particular thread of yours.
Do I have to review all the requests?
No you don't have to, just do your best :). Though completing them all will give you 7 extra points.
Which requests should I review?
If you want to get points for the next member's update, look for the latest requests list in the club thread and review the requests from that list. If you review any requests from various posts in the thread which would have been posted after the latest requests list, you will be getting points for the member's update after the next one.
can u review allz mah flashz guise? kthxbai.
No.
If you have more questions, feel free to post about it in the thread or PM a member and if your question is frequently asked, it'll be added to the FAQ.
---
That's all about the club, though this new version of the club couldn't be opened without mentioning the old thread regulars who have made it a great place to spend time. Kudos to Freelance-Magician for creating the original club and to FattyWhale for maintaining it for so long. Thanks also to Sonofkirk for starting this new thread and doing many updates.
Have fun!
Useful links: RRC - The point system, clarified, Fro's Guide to Writing Helpful Reviews, Fro's Guide to Writing Good Reviews
Resources: Old Review Request Club thread, Club info, Google.
Review Request Club | CHECK THIS OUT | Formerly Supersteph54 | I'm an Audio Moderator. PM me for Audio Portal help.
At 5/24/11 05:04 AM, Supersteph54 wrote: Member's Update #84
Thanks for the update"
[#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]
01 ) 7552 | 1177 / 2135 | 055.13% || 006 | 01 / 14 | 007.14% | Coop
02 ) 7353 | 1142 / 2139 | 053.39% || 027 | 04 / 14 | 028.57% | Haggard
Glad that I could keep my promise by writing more reviews than I did last time. ^^
Let's see if I can write 5 reviews before the next update...
Surf Nazis must die! || Wi/Ht? #38
At 5/21/11 02:55 PM, Suprememessage wrote: I want to request you guys to review this:
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/55 8893
It is a work of mine
This request is still left unfullfilled.
Ecchi first, ask questions never.
Hope you guys don't mind my rock music. :D
Also, SuperSteph, I plan on redoing and resubmitting that generic rock remake.
Sorry I took it down earlier. (Along with the rest of my stuff.)
This account is now defunct and will now serve as an alt - _)-UltimateCJ64-(_
Seriously, I'm serious.
At 5/24/11 10:10 PM, SCTE3 wrote: 69 points for the week!!
now I am just a little under SuperSteph54, small list this week was,Was looking through some of the other pages from last year and summer vacation looked like a nightmare since each update was about 2-3 weeks a part there was 40-50+ requests each list and we had more members, good times.
Those lists were definitely intimidating. They took me several days of reviewing to get through. But on the bright side I actually had enough time to give critique on them even if it took forever for the feedback. Hopefully we don't ever get back to a point where it takes a month to give a review. I might not be able to give many reviews myself but the weekly system gives artists quicker feedback.
