Hmm..
I see you are very artistic, but the thing is, you don't spend enough time on each and every individual characters, and you could also spend more time on the animation as well. You are capable of much better, but it doesn't seem like you tend to put alot of time into animation.
Seriously, if you spent a few months, instead of weeks on this length of animation, you'd make the top 50 easily.
Pretty Good
Only thing is make the intro shorter it was longer than the actual movie and there were some typing errors lol, other then that it was really good i liked it alot
hmmm....
Well, some parts had good art, but mostly it wasn't good. You used two diff styles. When they were animated, it was crappy. When they were still, you did more detailed artwork. I would have looked past that if it were a regular episode and the story was good, but all it was was 5 min. of random fights with annoying j-pop in the background. I closed it before it finished because i waited too long and nothing happened.
If this is supposed to be a series, then next time use storyline, and if that was just the theme song i was sitting through before i closed it, sorry, but you shouldn't make the song so long if you want folks to watch the episode.
If not, nevermind.
Anyway, it was alright, nothing special. 6/10
Not bad but needs more work
The shading was okay, but could have used a little more details in the characters and body proportions accuracy. Your loading bar goes past the bar at the beginning. The voice...sorry I hated it. Too computerized go to the voice acting club forum if you need voice actors (they do this for free) Intro...a bit too long than the episode. Well, at best a 6 since you drew so much.
Oh also, you should make the hair flow so it doesn't look so stale and static.
Good luck, otherwise this story is interesting.
Better than the other stuff
Your entry was a breath of fresh air in the unbelievable amount of terrible stuff I've had to see today already. I admit that the sound is a little off and the computer generated voices were absolutely terrible but at least you can draw! And more so, you can animate to an extent as well!