Sorry, but it needs cleaning up
I'm sure that with practice, you'll be able to beautifully animate this. As it is, the graphics and topic are simply not developed enough to warrant passage through the portal.
Also, I miss Tsubasa Chronicle too. It's a shame about season 3 being postponed/cancelled. But I don't miss it so bad that I'll let this get through out of generosity. (For those wondering what the hell I'm talking about, look it up and compare the character models to the ones in this movie).