Wow
This is pretty amazing. I loved the pacing, and the mood it set was great. For every serious and depressing moment, there was a bit of comic relief to pick it right back up. I loved how you were able to use such a cartoony style and still tell an interesting story. This should be remembered in Newgrounds history for a long time.
lucky bastard!
He got breakfast! I don’t get breakfast! I want breakfast! Lucky bastard!
Great Work
This was very fun to watch. It depressed me at times, but would turn right around and go for the laugh. What I really liked though was that everytime the viewer understands the routine something new happens or changes, making it impossible to guess what will happen next.
Poor Jerry, as you make him appear a victim his final reward doesn't seem quite just. Perhaps this is the unsettling ending your going for, but it mad me feel that much worse.
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This thing had a great impact. I think, contrary to previous review, that it was well paced. You really left me intrigued with the repetitive character of Jerry's life, and the mishaps down the road. Every day is the same old same, until something gets messed up.
Best I've seen in a good while.
You should make one based off of his life in hell.