Reviews for - defender -

[Dave1993]

It was full of little fixer uppers................

you need to work on some things like...

1. Play Button
2. Loading Thingy (*LOL*)
3. Security Guards gun is upside down...
4. When he dogdes thingy (whatever it is) at start you see a little white thing cut into his head
5. His smile at the start after first kill doesnt stay on his face. He Walks away and it floats there...
6. When boss grows and opens his mouth he has no teeth but then they start appearing they should appear all at once when he opens up mouth...

Keep working at it. Im sure that if you try hard you can make something out of this !

Frenzy responds:

1. Play Button
? It worked... but if you pressed it on the first frame it wouldnt work because you cant stop movie on the first frame, sow ait a second and itll work.

2. Loading Thingy (*LOL*)
?

3. Security Guards gun is upside down...
It's supposed to be

4. When he dogdes thingy (whatever it is) at start you see a little white thing cut into his head
Yeah, I know that was unintenional... lol sorry about that.

5. His smile at the start after first kill doesnt stay on his face. He Walks away and it floats there...
Yeah, sorry about that too.

6. When boss grows and opens his mouth he has no teeth but then they start appearing they should appear all at once when he opens up mouth...
Their supposed to appear seperately. It makes him look more menaciung.

Thanks for the review!

[Oldeze]

um

the sound effects were great but sadly thats probably the only thing that was good.
you really needed a plot.
and the animation could use a LOT of work
but it actually wasn't too bad

Frenzy responds:

Did you protect it?

Thanks anyway!

[Coop]

Prove a point for me

Come on man, do me someting decent to review please.

So, this is a stick animation, where the gore is amateurish and some of the images haven't even been cut out properly. Still, the um... music was good (I'm struggling for positives here) and so were the gun sound effects, even though the muzzle flash stayed on screen for too long and it all lacked some plot.

Still, you've made something decent out of the sounds, so try to build on that for next time

[Review Request Club]

Frenzy responds:

lol, I'm not much of an aniamtor, as viewable on my other movies... I use a program that has limited animation possibilites.

Thanks for the good review!
~ Z

[FattyWhale]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, the music and sound effects were at least of good quality, though they could still be compressed quite a bit and still sound pretty much the same.

^^Needs Improving^^
Seriously, this was not good in the animation department. Nothing wrong with sticks, but you need to animate them a whole lot better. If this program you use has such limited capacity that this is what you produce, you should probably just remove it from your computer.

Review Request Club

Frenzy responds:

Then I can't make Flash!

Thanks for the review!

~ Z

[bane1234]

ok

like it was ok but you need to work on animation and everything else like when the thing flew over his head theyre was a border around it that you could see jus work on it

but the song was good

Frenzy responds:

Thanks, yeah No Use for a Name is awesome eh?

Thanks again for the review!

~ Z