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Reviews for "- defender -"

wel.... not awesome

im sorry, but i didnt voted good. i think it was unfair, but i did it becaus e it had some major errors, first , it had that kw sign over the flash, all over , and seemed not good, then the chainsaw that they threw at your character was still with the whit e box outline .... and also the drawings were not so good, and the guard, if you look at his gun, he points it down, like he wants to shoot the floor.... and the sound was weird when themonster, came.... and however , it was short..... so i think you should make it longert and of better drawn quality... and as i suggest you, try make twists. it has a good story. just make it longer. man thats it

Frenzy responds:

Thanks for the 10 and the review!

~ Z

It was full of little fixer uppers................

you need to work on some things like...

1. Play Button
2. Loading Thingy (*LOL*)
3. Security Guards gun is upside down...
4. When he dogdes thingy (whatever it is) at start you see a little white thing cut into his head
5. His smile at the start after first kill doesnt stay on his face. He Walks away and it floats there...
6. When boss grows and opens his mouth he has no teeth but then they start appearing they should appear all at once when he opens up mouth...

Keep working at it. Im sure that if you try hard you can make something out of this !

Frenzy responds:

1. Play Button
? It worked... but if you pressed it on the first frame it wouldnt work because you cant stop movie on the first frame, sow ait a second and itll work.

2. Loading Thingy (*LOL*)
?

3. Security Guards gun is upside down...
It's supposed to be

4. When he dogdes thingy (whatever it is) at start you see a little white thing cut into his head
Yeah, I know that was unintenional... lol sorry about that.

5. His smile at the start after first kill doesnt stay on his face. He Walks away and it floats there...
Yeah, sorry about that too.

6. When boss grows and opens his mouth he has no teeth but then they start appearing they should appear all at once when he opens up mouth...
Their supposed to appear seperately. It makes him look more menaciung.

Thanks for the review!

Pretty Cool

I like it ... it was kinda bad on the graphics side you should improve on that ...other than that pretty good

Frenzy responds:

Thanks!

um

the sound effects were great but sadly thats probably the only thing that was good.
you really needed a plot.
and the animation could use a LOT of work
but it actually wasn't too bad

Frenzy responds:

Did you protect it?

Thanks anyway!

Bad.

The music was terrible, the sound effects were annoying, and the graphics made the flash look like it was only made within a few minutes. When the red stick figure ducked from a rocket, it was easy to tell the rocket was a photo taken from the internet because the backround overlapped on the red stick figure. There was no creativity and barely any time used making this flash.

Frenzy responds:

You're right about no time used!