pretty cool
awsome job just the music was crappy i like the repeat thing i love those
Reviews for "Randomness of Thinking"
tudway responds:
thanks mate ^_^
i have tried to fix the music and it loops better now
Not a bad try
Alright, I'm not sugar coating this for you, so get ready for your review.
A good thing was your style; I like animations that can have random actions without an annoying outcome. You should work a little on your flow, but it takes time so I understand and won't burn you for that. Some cons were the menu; the upload bar did not disappear upon finishing. Another would be the movie loops. I wasn’t sure if something else was going to happen because of the style you chose it sent me on a run around and I wound up watching it twice. So in the future add a replay button so we know the flash is over. Last thing I’m going to knock you on is the title, yes it is witty, but its in all lowercase, in the future try to format the title properly so it would say something like "Randomness of Thinking" I say this because I normally won't even think about giving a review if the title is in all lowercase.
Other than that you did okay for someone who is new to all this.
Good luck on your next flash and I hope you have picked up on some of my points.
This flash gets 3.7 out of 5 fish heads!
I like that kind of flash.
I found it good for a first try. However, it was a bit short.
Here's my review:
Graphics: 4. Graphics were good, for a first time. And it fitted with the context, so this is ok.
Style: 8. That was... what can I say? Cute? Anyway, I like your style. I hope you'll do another flash soon.
Sound: 5. Yea, music was ok. You said you had a problem with the sound loop? Good that you have fixed it.
Violence: 0. No violence, but you didn't need that, huh?
Interactivity: 1. One point for the "Play" button.
Overall: 7. So, as I said, you should do more like that. If you upload another flash one day, I would like to receive a PM from you, ok? Keep it up!
Artsy and good
I know most people don't really like the artsy and random type movies, but I'm a great fan, and this movie is one of the best I've seen on the genre.
There were many good things about the movie, my favourite being the way everything seemed to just flow into each other, like some weird 3D painting or sculpture.
The music was very good, and well suited to the overall movie. The one thing I would say that needs improving, is the looping of it. It seem a to cut out slightly, but I can see it probably was a had song to loop.
The graphics were very simple but for an arty type movie were quite good. I really liked the squiggly line movement in bodies. But in saying that it could be improved on a bit.
All in all a very nice piece of Flash Art. Keep up the good work
A simple and solid first submission
I like your minimalist approach. I’m guessing you just learned flash a little wile ago. Not because your animation was bad, only because it lacked polish (unless that’s exactly what you where going for)
Keep making animation, you seem to channel your creativity threw it.
tudway responds:
thanks for the review
and yeah, im new to animating
thanks for the tip