I liked it very much
It's very artsy. The sound messed up a little. I would love to see more flash by you, especially like this. It's very modern and creative.
5 out of 5.
I liked it very much
It's very artsy. The sound messed up a little. I would love to see more flash by you, especially like this. It's very modern and creative.
5 out of 5.
I like that kind of flash.
I found it good for a first try. However, it was a bit short.
Here's my review:
Graphics: 4. Graphics were good, for a first time. And it fitted with the context, so this is ok.
Style: 8. That was... what can I say? Cute? Anyway, I like your style. I hope you'll do another flash soon.
Sound: 5. Yea, music was ok. You said you had a problem with the sound loop? Good that you have fixed it.
Violence: 0. No violence, but you didn't need that, huh?
Interactivity: 1. One point for the "Play" button.
Overall: 7. So, as I said, you should do more like that. If you upload another flash one day, I would like to receive a PM from you, ok? Keep it up!
Not a bad try
Alright, I'm not sugar coating this for you, so get ready for your review.
A good thing was your style; I like animations that can have random actions without an annoying outcome. You should work a little on your flow, but it takes time so I understand and won't burn you for that. Some cons were the menu; the upload bar did not disappear upon finishing. Another would be the movie loops. I wasn’t sure if something else was going to happen because of the style you chose it sent me on a run around and I wound up watching it twice. So in the future add a replay button so we know the flash is over. Last thing I’m going to knock you on is the title, yes it is witty, but its in all lowercase, in the future try to format the title properly so it would say something like "Randomness of Thinking" I say this because I normally won't even think about giving a review if the title is in all lowercase.
Other than that you did okay for someone who is new to all this.
Good luck on your next flash and I hope you have picked up on some of my points.
This flash gets 3.7 out of 5 fish heads!
Nice drawings
It remembers fractals. I hope you draw more illusions.
Original
I like it. It's something else then all the defense games or shoot em ups on newgrounds. Nice job, but i don't think this is the best site to demonstrate such works as these...Keep it up though:)