im really sorry but in my personal opinion
it was kind of a bit of a 5 year olds story book tale, that had a horrible plot. heres some tips
1. If your doing a clocks flash, dont, and i mean dont mix it with real characters, that just makes the movie anoyying, but for you case, even worse a flash where all the characters are really clocks.
2. do not add dragonball z to anything but dragon ball z, because that does not make your flash look cool, it makes it look pointless to watch, and i have seen thousands of thoose kinds and they all piss me and alot of others off.
3. your upside was your graphics they were awsome, and you had a few good songs, but the ending one SUCKED!.
4.your preloader could have been interactive,. but at least you had one.
5.i liked the kirby part, and mario, but hated the no plot addition of crusty dragon ballz and clocks please dont do that, or never and i mean NEVER EVER EVER EVER EVER make a cartoon with a romantic ending, it sucks as a non cartoon, and makes your ending, what people see last look horrible.