good
im sure it would have been better if i knew the story.
good
im sure it would have been better if i knew the story.
AWESOME!!!!!!!!
normaly i hate collabs but this was awesome!!!! you done real good
it was very well done but..
A couple problems, when they are fighting on the roof i'm sure you noticed the sound bug, and also the dudes eyes change between green and red in certain scenes. And I'm not so sure that bullet shells are really needed that bad, they could look at the wound or wait for an autopsy. Anyway sorry for all the citisism cause it was very good, good job.
Mostly very well done
Pros: The animators involved are obviously vry accomplished and each had their own style . Each scene (with the exception of the 2nd) worked pretty well and the narrative flowed coherently. The voice acting was also very good.
Cons: The second scene was out of place both in terms of its slightly amateur-ish look and its awkward attempt at humour (not that an attempt at humour is necessarily a bad thing, but the lame 'bugs' jokes were simply not funny.) The second scene also had some kind of sound glitch where the same bit of conversation played twice. Overall, the dialogue was ok, but pretty much just crime movie cliches. Also, an improvement that would really make a difference would be an option to turn off the music on the loading screen.
Most excellent, only "The Lookout" sucked.
Really really good mostly, but whoever did "The Lookout" seriously brought the whole thing down a notch. Great animation, sound and voice acting in the other 4 though.
My advice: Next time either make that dude get his ass in gear, or do a collab without him.