Reviews for Minefield

[Mr-Furious]

Disappointing.

The graphics weren't good at all, but it isn't because you used sticks, I'm a very pro-stick reviewer. But, the blood effects and the handgun just plain sucked. The plot didn't seem too bad but I really didn't see anything having to do with a minefield. The gunshots and the music were really nice though, but I must say the flash was wayyyy too short. Please, remake and submit this with more scenes, better graphics, and a more engaging story. I think you might have some potential to be a pretty decent artist. Thank you.

Responses are appreciated.

Frenzy responds:

Ha ha,here's your response! :)

Thanks, I'm working on a bigger, better flash. This is a just a test, really. Thanks!

[FattyWhale]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the storyline doesn't seem to be too bad. Seems like if you have some good ideas it could have some decent events in it. The sound effects are good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This needs a lot of work graphically. Your drawings are very poor, and the animations are lacking a lot. You need to do some more detailed animations that are more realistic. Also, work on drawing some backgrounds to make up for this a little bit.

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Frenzy responds:

Thanks!

[JNels]

Not a very fun work.

Hmm, I say, unsure of how to continue. I actually thought this had an inkling of potential, but was too amateurish to appease me. The story, which would've been the main selling point, was nonexistent, though since you said it was only a prequel I suppose I'm supposed to overlook that. Still, without a real story, that just leaves the incredibly poor graphics, weak sound, and lack of voicework to shine through. At least you can spell, unlike some of the people here. Too bad this wasn't a real movie. With some improved graphics, better sound, and maybe a real plot, this could've been a contender. As it stands, it's only half-done.

Frenzy responds:

Yeah, I'm working a better version.

This was really just a test.

Thanks for the review!

[Akari-c-e]

Was this Cobbled Together At Last Minute?

After Watching This, I Found Myself Thinking How Anyone Could Submit Something So Bad? This Flash Is So bad, And It's Done In A Way That Seems To Apologize For It's Own Existence;If Only I Could Bring My Self To Care. I Don't Mean to Be A Asshole-I Mean That. you Could've Done Better. I'll Be looking Forward To Improvement From You In The Future.

Frenzy responds:

Did you watch the second Minefield? It's much better than this one. Thanks for the review.

[rockbox]

hmmm

Well the graphics were'nt that great. The plot was nice. When you get better at drawing and stuff I would definatly suggest redoing this one. I think it would turn out great then.

Frenzy responds:

Thanks!