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The stickmen were very badly drawn, there was no background, and the gun looked like creap. Make a beter gun, a better background, and add some blood. No blood? I thought you said this was graphic. It was way too short, only like a minute long (without the intro) Not really any storyline so add one and add some humor somehow.
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^^Good Points^^
Ok, the storyline doesn't seem to be too bad. Seems like if you have some good ideas it could have some decent events in it. The sound effects are good too.
^^Needs Improving^^
This needs a lot of work graphically. Your drawings are very poor, and the animations are lacking a lot. You need to do some more detailed animations that are more realistic. Also, work on drawing some backgrounds to make up for this a little bit.
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Unstable foundations...
...should not be used when building, as this leads to subsidence. Metaphorically speaking, this is what I feel about this flash.
The sound is decent, but you need to actually act the voices out yourself, or get a friend to, I'm not that bothered.
Your graphics need work - I'm not the biggest fan of sticks, but these are poorly animated ones. Was that a gun in the first scene? It barely looked like one. Still, working on these can only improve you.
However, this has the beginnings of a decent plotline, which must be nurtured, so that it can blossom to its full potential.
I'm getting quite philosophical about this flash...
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Not a very fun work.
Hmm, I say, unsure of how to continue. I actually thought this had an inkling of potential, but was too amateurish to appease me. The story, which would've been the main selling point, was nonexistent, though since you said it was only a prequel I suppose I'm supposed to overlook that. Still, without a real story, that just leaves the incredibly poor graphics, weak sound, and lack of voicework to shine through. At least you can spell, unlike some of the people here. Too bad this wasn't a real movie. With some improved graphics, better sound, and maybe a real plot, this could've been a contender. As it stands, it's only half-done.
Yeah, I'm working a better version.
This was really just a test.
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like stick cinima to short though
stick animation is the one thing ii can actualy do right the gun could have used a luttle more work along with the blood and mace the flash atleast a luttle longer keep the whole cliff hanger just give us a luttle more to immagen about whats going to happen
Umm... ok, thanks for the somewhat positive review!
P.S. Did you get your name from Timesplitters: Future Perfect?