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^^Good Points^^
The storyline wasn't too bad. It was a little bit funny just because of how random and strange it is, but I got some entertainment out of it.
^^Needs Improving^^
This submission was just really weird. First off, didn't really like the characters. The one had that really high voice, and the other talked like an idiot. The animations weren't great, try to work on them. You will get better though with more practice.
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I'm practicing alot don't worry.
lol Thoughs were me and Jays real voices ouch.
Work in progress
Well, your style lacks finesse, but there is certainly a few bits and pieces which you can refine over time. The animation isn't very fluid in my eyes and the sound quality is a little off in places. Personally, I'd suggest not using the voice like Foamy's as a bad guy, since he talked 3-4 times too fast for us to understand.
Still, the plot could be really good, if it's been fleshed out a bit, so don't be disheartened, just carry on and write some better material, I'm sure you'll learn some great techniques to make this a whole load better.
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Thanks man. Yeah I'm not going to fix this one anytime soon. I've been getting better and better with each Duders flash. I'll keep this one to remind me how the duders original looked and to watch it for a pathetic laugh.