Intriguing
Very interesting story line. Nice choice of music, excellent voicework. Appreciate the ghoulish thought bubbles the most, love it. Creative, twisted, disturbing, and yet elegant. Beautiful work.
Intriguing
Very interesting story line. Nice choice of music, excellent voicework. Appreciate the ghoulish thought bubbles the most, love it. Creative, twisted, disturbing, and yet elegant. Beautiful work.
Thank you so much. That's exactly the response I was seeking.
I personally. . .
LOVE THis story. A bit creepy but I'm not much better. I liked the end the most. Perhaps cause, Jeremy deserved it.
He sure did. So happy you loved it.
How sad.
What a very sad story. He probably learned a lesson. I personally believe you don't deserve to die like that, no one does... It was very creepy, but the ending was kind of sudden. Anyways it was a sad little tale, I give 4.
How do you know he's dead?
Thanks for the review and score
Q
good and funny.
the only reason it doesnt get a top score is that it feels a lot like salad fingers to me. and salad fingers has always made me very uncomfortable.
nice, nice
very creative story and great rhyming.
some real talent here!