Creepy, but amusing
Sweet rhyme scheme and I LOVED the colors! Evocative of those bright oranges and bold grays used on Halloween cards and posters. Great narration, great story, fitting music and creepy-ass kid! Loved the silhouettes of his past life.
Hope you guys will submit something else freaky this Halloween!
Scary Rhyme!
Very good, i love the rhyme, your quite sick dude :/ .^^. Anyways great stuff.
Oooh wow.
That was really creepy, with the voice and music and all. The rhyming was a good thing, too. Nice job conveying creepiness.
I personally. . .
LOVE THis story. A bit creepy but I'm not much better. I liked the end the most. Perhaps cause, Jeremy deserved it.
He sure did. So happy you loved it.
How sad.
What a very sad story. He probably learned a lesson. I personally believe you don't deserve to die like that, no one does... It was very creepy, but the ending was kind of sudden. Anyways it was a sad little tale, I give 4.
How do you know he's dead?
Thanks for the review and score
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