Clown school recommended?
The jokes were the complete downfall of this flash. The timing was bad, how they were distributed, and not witty or clever at all. Dont rely on sound and graphics to save you.
Clown school recommended?
The jokes were the complete downfall of this flash. The timing was bad, how they were distributed, and not witty or clever at all. Dont rely on sound and graphics to save you.
1o thing not to do, blah blah blah....
ok, this went on wayyyy to long. i guess since haloween is coming you decided to make this...
it was really <SLOW>. the voices sounded too much like Terrance and Philip. mabe you could have only done 5 things...
fagget
make one using a leg u can use mine cuz there probably gonna cut it of
bitch
farfetched in a wrong way
Well, can't say it was very funny, didn't like the voice after a while, did at the start though... I think you shouldn't be so consistant in your humor. It's funny to include this as a short, but don't discus more than 1 thing to do with the arm and go on being random more drastically, don't continue about the arm, it just... wears down the movie. You excecuted it nicely and it's still a praiseworthy achievement, but it'd be better if you revise your humor. Let it be quicker, intenser and less focussed
damn man,
i really would like to give you a higher score i really would, its just that that voice was like nails on a chalkboard and the humor was kinda witty, but kinda dumb too