all I'd
+++ Cool idea.
+++ Some amusing things to do.
--- Many seemed predictable to me though with no interesting spins put on.
-- I found the voice and mouth style a tad annoying.
- at #9. the sound suddenly changed. Slightly jarring.
+++ Great bmp of dismembered arm at end.
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Cool movie. Vaguely enjoyed it, though it wasn't all I'd hoped.
Good start but made me bored at the end
Yes it was funny, but around number 6 it got a bit boring and the guy got to the point where I wanted to punch him. I do like the graphics but the camera movements kinda made me sick. The weather was great detail but unneeded. Very original idea. Probly the coolest preloader I have seen yet, may I sugesst nextime have the bricks scatter when they fall instead of stacking up.
Abstract Humor
Well i appreciated the humor, obvisously others haven't since they lack the intellectual capacity to understand irony. Graphics were smooth, simple and effective so you've got my vote. voice acting could of used more defintion. the plot was so-so, a bit predictable, could have used some surprises to liven it up.
Good work for your first notch
thanks for the contructive Crit. al knuckle down better next time i know myself i could do better script/story wise!
but thanks! taken on board!
kinda funny
didnt make me laugh too loudly but kept me generally happy good work imo :D.
10 things to do with a flash animation
-never submit it
-delete it
-never put it on front page
-never vote over a 2
-never show to anyone
-never try to repeat the same idea
-never put the protagonists squealing voice ever again
-learn from it to never make an animation that's so slow
-learn from it to never imitate the humor
-shove it up your ass so it tays surrounded with things that are similar to it