all I'd
+++ Cool idea.
+++ Some amusing things to do.
--- Many seemed predictable to me though with no interesting spins put on.
-- I found the voice and mouth style a tad annoying.
- at #9. the sound suddenly changed. Slightly jarring.
+++ Great bmp of dismembered arm at end.
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Cool movie. Vaguely enjoyed it, though it wasn't all I'd hoped.
kinda funny
didnt make me laugh too loudly but kept me generally happy good work imo :D.
A Good Start
I agree with TSRevolutionary...while the graphics were great and everything was properly animated the script does need improvement. I know you've heard from other reviews but the strong point of your script was the beginning. It just started to die off after about number 4. Except for the lamp idea of course. I think the problem was with pacing. While the slow speech was suppose to stay true with the accent and look of the character, I always had the feeling that things needed to be faster. And I'm not talking about random crazy fast humor most flash animators use that makes no sense at all. Just increase the speed a little so there isn't such a gap between each joke. Also I think you need to change location more. You did at the beginning but besides that everything was in the lab. It makes the flash seem static. Well good job man I can't wait for your next animation.
-PharoahsRaiment
Saterday Special
Well this was a great flash and you did work hard on it but you made the jokes sound like a cartoon special's
Try showing this to nickelodeon and they might make it a brand new show.
10 things to do with a flash animation
-never submit it
-delete it
-never put it on front page
-never vote over a 2
-never show to anyone
-never try to repeat the same idea
-never put the protagonists squealing voice ever again
-learn from it to never make an animation that's so slow
-learn from it to never imitate the humor
-shove it up your ass so it tays surrounded with things that are similar to it