Ok..
The pre-loader was ugly and not very professional.
The fight wasnt that bad, but it lacked a background, good music.
The zooming was... well weird..?
Reviews for "Mario Kombat!"
Decent, but I liked it.
Could use some work.
I like the fact that it had Mario Vs Luigi, but it was so small.
And could have used a backround.
I hope that your submission stays alive, but you never know.
Peace.
Needs some work
You could make a good flash out of this, but you need to work harder and longer on it. For instance, spend some time animating the sprites instead of just rotating them around. It really needed sound effects, too, and it would have looked nicer if it was zoomed in a bit. Work hard and keep trying, though.
Ok
The music and scenes weren't to bad. The main problem was the background was non-existant and it was completly random. The fight scene could have been so much better. I have to give it to you though, you did put the time into making this and it does show potential, keep at it and i'm sure you'll come up with the winning combination in the future.
Good luck.
Wow....
Problems with this video: No background, Sound effects should have been used ( didnt seem like a silent movie ), the violence looked like they where dry humping O.o and u might want to get the movments a little more reailistic.
In conclotion:
You need to do some home work. Watch some more sprite movies, alot more sprite movies.
Try to get some more realalistic movment going on.
Hell, in fact, playing the game could help alot!
Also, you could put in a background and pipe sprites are very easy to come across.
Try looking for sounds on google. Mario sounds.
Try to make the whole think flow to.
And last but no least... Take Your Time! Rome wasn't made in a day, nore was this site or any of the GREAT videos on it.
Keep at it!
-Bones
carocrazy132 responds:
ya i was going to put in a background but as ive said 3,000,000,000 times, i lost the fla, and i played the game enough, trust me ive had 100% game completion on ALL-STARS but i made this like a month ago soo....................... i sucked then