Reviews for Story of Khale Trailer

[filipino-dragon21]

Tailer=bad, everything else=good

Alot of potential in the series itself, but the trailer seemed kind of weak to me. It felt more like watching a very short story (or an opening cutscene... a bad one at that) then a trailer which is meant to grab attention and make you want more. I guess you just put too much information in the trailer itself. Try using more visualy stunning grabbers (and you did real well with the animation) to tell the story rather than telling us outright. Give cliff hangers and keep us asking questions. I give a moderately low score for this, but I expect that I will be giving higher points in the actual series.

But aside from all that, I can not wait for the actual series to come out. Your animation is good, the story line seems fluid, and if you can make your battle scenes look good like you did with how he killed those three things, then I see alot of potential.

Overall: Alot of potential, but the trailer was just.... ugh...

[Fledgling]

Um.

Dont use sound effects from warcraft.
they dont sound good.
find better ones.
find better music too.
the music really didnt go too well with it
in my opinion
and it was too choppy
the storyline was too bland
storylines that unfold as the story goes are better
u just kinda handed it out
"He finds a sword."
"The sword changes him"
Collects crystals or some shit...
In my opinion this wuda beena better trailer if...
it were a pure battle...
between the Khale...
and like...
a shadowed figure....
kinda like the Valhalla Knights flash.
now I know there are gonna be people
who bitch at me
and say Im retarded and this was a good flash
well it was a trailer
and it was too plain
but this definitely needs to get more thought put into it
especially in story line and sound
Surprises are Good
Introduce characters as it goes
well it might be too late now for other heroes
maybe a rival
new villains shud be easy
there u go

[bboy-flite]

i dunno

it looks like u have put together sumthin cool but u have ripped a lot of things of such as:

music- to evry1 no he did not make it it is the final fantasy 6 battle theme

the dark forest- off final fantasy aswell

the guy in the dark forest- fullmetal alchemist

even names like chocodon does that remind any1 of a chocobo

LeafWorthy responds:

The name is Chobodon, it actually comes from the word chobo ("impolite" in korean, also a slang word from the warcraft/starcraft communities). I put credits for the music (check the title screen). And I guess all dark forests are off limits just because final fantasy did it...? Gimme a break people.

[wolfstine]

Nothing I haven't seen before.

It looks entertaining, but it's really nothing new. The story hasn't changed (evil sword, big surprise!). Reminds me a bit of the Jak and Daxter games.

[InfamousMonkey]

Try to be a bit more original:

While watching this, I thought to myself "Oh look, it's Zelda +Soul Caiber+ Lord of the Rings". The animation is decent, the music is good, but easily recognizable from Final Fantasy. I'd like to see in the real movie some unique dialogue and character interactions. Just try to make it your own, instead of a collaberation of already great ideas.

-IM