Reviews for StarCraft: Alliance

[yaujte]

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Ive watched your series. So far the story plot is too interesting to resist. Its addicting ^^ However, I can not help but complain about the sounds and voice acting. Not enough music and etchy characters. They could use some help. But I am pleased to see that the ships and other vehicle like stuff were pretty good. Graphics are similar to Rune Scape but none the less still good. Yet another problem crossed my mind which involves voice acting(sry man, they bore me half to death) and action. THe fight scenes btwx the Protoss and the Terran space forces were quit captivating except when the Yamato gun struck the Carrier, I was expecting a little more than a ship toppling over like tiny blocks in a stack. I think there should have been shaking or flashing explosion or something. :P Just as you did with the ending! Oh man You had me holding my seat at the end and then boom 'To be Continued' T_T
thats cruel. The best portion of the entire movie saved to the end. Well the thought is thorughly planned out and I like the story thus far. Ill keep watching to see how this all ends. ;P Keep it up! END WITH A BANG YO!

LogFish responds:

Oh it's ending with a bang, beleive me, heheheh. I see aspects of 2D and my voiceacting as weak points still to be fixed so I'll be working on those - thanks for the pointers! Glad you're enjoying the way it's all panning out :)

[eeyore540]

good

i liked the space batlle the most...overall it was pretty good tho i liked the use of 3d animation and the plot is gettting pretty interesting

[TheThirdM1911A1]

This arrived more quickly than expected...

...but when you think about it, that's actually a good thing. Graphics seemed to get even better with this one (or maybe it's just my imagination) but the zerg units still looked a bit odd to me. Style is of course a 10. The story is unique and interesting and continues to remind me of StarCraft. Sound. Well voices are clear and you can understand what all the characters are saying (even if you can't subtitles are there) and you kept plenty of in-game StarCraft sounds in the flash but the acting left something to be desired. Maybe you could be a bit more enthusiastic? And sometimes it sounds like you aren't sure what to say next; like you're just reading off a sheet of paper. Fixing that would improve the "experience". Other than that sounds were good (music fit the situation pretty well). Violence, well it had violence. Not bloody or gorey but there was a lot. You get an 8. Interactivity. Well it was a nice idea to put all the stuff in the preloader so there's something to do while you wait and you get to choose what scene to watch. That's more than most. Keep that. Humor. Well it wasn't oo frequent but it was there. It's obvious that this isn't a flash made for humor, but more a flash made to tell a great story. At least you're trying. Overall I liked this one a lot, and actually I think it's my favorite one so far. I hope the next one comes out in as short a period of time as it took this one to come out. I'm looking forward to see what happens.

LogFish responds:

Thanks! And it probably won't come out in such a short space of time this time - it's not like I'm slacking off and watching tv or something, I'm just busy n stuff trying to find work.

[mindlessmonkey112]

sweeeet

I'm becoming a bigger fan of you!

Though, i was kind of sad when it got to scene 2, i was hoping that the Terrans were gonna get their asses kicked, especially when the Dragoon, and Zealots came out. But you had to use it as a plot thickener....i guess it was okay, but i would have rathered the Terrans sustain casualties.

PROS.
But...you addressed everything that i had a problem with in the previous episode (THANK YOU!!!!)!!

The Hydras and Lings were very distinguishable in this, although they didn't really put up much of a fight against Odyseuss....well that's cause protoss is kickass.

The mouths were alot better, thank you. It actually worked! It wasn't painful to watch it anymore! lol.

CONS.
Although i liked the plot, following it along was kind of hard. The info was a little jumbled, and i found myself spacing out when Odyseuss was talking. He seemed to have been speaking too slowly for me.

Although you have raised the bar on your flash's graphics, there still is alot more you can do. Especially on the character models. I was disappointed when i found myself comparing the look of a Zealot compared to the Ghost. Or the guy on Forward Command.

The battles. Although the battles were really well done. They were incredibly short. The Zerg encounter on the Promethean area, Odyseuss killed 2 Hydras and 2 Zerglings with one hit. Doesn't seem really believable to me, although it was kinda cool =P And the space battle, right after the first Cruiser was destroyed, like 12 more cruisers came outta no where and pwned the shit outta the Protoss Armada. And why did the Protoss send only like 3 Ships?

What I found funny, in the space battle: I started laughing when the first carrier was destroyed cause it had on it's car alarm. Lol.

I'm starting to write longer reviews. Ha.

Good Job man, I'm looking forward to the next one.

5/5

P.S. I know this might be asking a lot, but for the last episode (which i sense is soon) should be all one big fight. You established all the plot in this installment, so I expect less talk of the plot in the next one. Thanks =P.

[Nitrocannon]

Excellent!

This one was even better than the first two! Can't WAIT for the next one, if you put in a Zerg base or two, I'd be extatic! Maybe some character variety, like different units, but otherwise this is one of the greatest StarCraft series'.

LogFish responds:

Yea I'm trying to add a new unit or two into each episode at least but it's getting less relevant to do so as the plot unfolds! The last episode I can go nuts and put everything in it I think, lol.